pein on death

[starstruck2]

Pein knows how they will end. He knows their deaths. He can see them one by one. Hidan, who will laugh and weep in the end, blood spilt into the earth that will refuse to claim his broken body, unholy in the end. Kakuzu will see his own blood drained, his own heart, still beating, crushed and ruined before his eyes. Kakuzu will be defeated, he

Comments

[yappatan]

This is beautiful! <333 I especially love the last paragraph.

[anonymous]

I think Pein and Konan are just about the coolest characters in Naruto. I wish more quality writers such as yourself would take up writing about them, since the possibilities are endless. The way I see it, they have the greatest window of opportunity to write about a messy relationship. I mean, they share a history, they're working for the dark side and what's best, they're both extremely cool and composed about everything. I'm rambling, what I originally meant to say was that I really liked this piece. I like the idea of Pain wondering about death since he's surrounded by people very hung up on immortality. I'd love to see you prode around his mind more often. And I know it probably means less coming from me since I say it so often, but you're a very terrific writer!!!! <3333