Fic: What Doesn't Kill Us - Chapter One

[starseed4]

Title: What Doesn't Kill Us
Chapter: Faint Beginnings
Word Count: 2025
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Eventual Roy/Riza with various appearances from the rest of the characters
Summary: Life rarely complicates itself at the right moments.
A/N: This is a legitimate attempt at a multi-chaptered fic, which is something I don't attempt too often (

Comments

[naive_wanderer]

Striding to his desk Roy tried to ignore the look Hawkeye was giving him, which was difficult because she was terrifying.

Oh, this line gave me a laugh -- straight to the point! :P

Actually, this entire chapter was very, very funny. Can't wait to read the rest!

[pleuvoir]

Ed ran a hand across his automail shoulder. "Al and I read about this new kind of alchemy. Close range explosives or some shit. How was I supposed to know it'd be so powerful?"

Roy suppressed a groan, covering his eyes with his hands. "And why did you continue to use it after the first blast?"

"Because it was awesome."

This made me fall in love with this. ♥

DO CONTINUE. >D

[handsomejin]

I absolutely adore how you portray everyone. I was laughing the whole fic. You stole my heart from "Because it was awesome."

Adding to memories for when I need cheering up.

[the_sunri]

you caught the interaction between the tachi members so well, and ed's bad attitude too! ♥ can't wait for how this continues! :D

[_pratz_]

*rubs hands* Waiting, waiting for more.