Prince of Tennis: Tezuka/Fuji, five elements: fire

[evaporate]

Title: _liminal space (2/5)
Author: evaporate.
Theme: Elements: Fire - 2.
Fandom: Prince of Tennis - Tezuka/Fuji.
Rating: overall PG-13, ~500 words
A/N: Military AU. Still no character death, but it might be coming.
( previous parts: #1: air )

Comments

[lusciniaecantus]

I don't know whether to cry or what. Look what you've done! D:

"Because it's about time," Fuji says, eyes bright as fire and cold as ice, "this pathetic world go up in flames."

That made me shiver. It's so good. Disturbing, but so good.

[evaporate]

D: Your AU is still better (eeeee, yakuza *flaps incoherently!*).

Thank you! :)

[reddwarfer]

Heeeee! I'm panting. *is such a dork* I love this AU. It's just so them. And so bloody haunting.

I love your writing. It's like watching someone make love to the language. It's so rare.

There's something bittersweet and defeatist about it all.

this pathetic world go(es) up in flames."

[evaporate]

Meeeeep, thank you. ♥

As for the bittersweet and defeatist, I'm fairly sure it's only going to get worse from here on out! And AP English is entirely to blame. :3

.... oh, wow, I can type. ._. [fixing, yes!]

[wax_feathers]

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Oh my goodness. Like. I've been waiting for you to post this since you first excerpted at me. Holy. Crud. ._.

I still can't decide what part is my favourite. Actually, I think I will favourite this. (If I am being delusional, do forgive; I did just wake up and am eating sugar sweet Asian corn puff things hence the one-handed slowness.)

asdgkdasfk *bibble* ♥

also, even if it's not entirely appropriate here...aaaaaxel.

[evaporate]

Is it bad that I actually attempted to read your keyboard smashing? And saw "hae" and thought "WHOO KOREAN!"?

Aww, but now you won't have anything to wait for.

STOP EATING SUGAR, WOMAN D: It's bad for you!

...? o___o roxaaaaaaas.

[wax_feathers]

...You nerd. :/ (Also, I can't romanize Korean for the life of me. D:)

Unless this was it, that angst that you mentioned not too long ago? :D Also, the continuation of apt(#)~ And this~ An-- Yeah. Still a lot more to wait for. :3

I DID. I restrained myself and put it away. Hence the faster responses on Y!M. x_o;

(...Er, it made more sense when I was thinking it. Something about this being a Tezuka/Fuji post, I guess.) aaaaaaaaaaaaaxel.

[goruden_kombi]

Wow. I love it. I really like the last line, as well as this one:

"You think this is real? Te-- Captain," Fuji says, almost wistful, almost pitying, "it's not real until someone dies."

I love this AU. It's bittersweet, macabre, reflective and just wonderful.

[evaporate]

Thanks so much! ♥

[missnhaca]

ACK, I dont know how I missed the first part, but I'll try to make up for it in this part.

This makes me tingle with anticipation. GUH it's sexy and so very wrong yet I love it to its and bits.

You AU makes me flutter. 8D