Another WIP for help (day 3)

[st_minority]

This one is a Sweeney Todd one. Of course, can't have consentual sex when Sweeney Todd is involved! Unless, Ichabod or Fred happen to be around, which they haven't been in mine. Anyway! For this, I know sort of what's going to happen, but I don't know how to go about/write the Todd's rape scene. And I just had a thought about having Fred make an

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[rose_melody2]

I think it's going good. You'll definitely find a way to continue the scene. And yes, Fred should definitely appear! :D

Just, pretty please don't write too much blood-play or gore-y things like that; it really churns my stomach, lol.

But, looking forward to it!

[st_minority]

Thank ya. :) Would it be better if Fred knows Sweeney before it happened? Pre-existing feelings? It'd sort of make the comfort easier. What do you think?

I'll try to keep whatever blood-play gore-y things that should happen turned down a notch. There may be none at all. :D

[rose_melody2]

Actually, yeah, that's what I was assuming - a pre-existing relationship between Fred and Sweeney; he just happened to not be mentioned in the first half of the fic.
How would you go about having Fred find Sweeney? Cause if he only came up to the barber shop a day after and Mrs. Lovett told him what happened, it wouldn't be very dramatic. Hm...

[st_minority]

Okay. Maybe not like, really developed to the point where they've slept together, but they know there's an attraction, maybe have even made out?
I was thinking he'd either come to Turpin's house and walk into the room to discover the guests gathered around the couch, watching as someone raped Sweeney, or he would come into the room just as the last person finished with Todd. What do you think?

[spookyfbi]

I remember discussing this one with you! Aww, don't bring Fred in. I think it'd be interesting to have Sweeny/Razor comfort. They were the ones that comforted him when he first arrived back at the begining. They'd waited for him. Ok, I just like the Swazor pairing. Maybe you could sort of personify the razor during the rape scene. He could be more indignant when they take his precious razor from him. And how dare they use his beloved silver friend to threaten him with, that sort of thing. I dunno, I just can't really picture Sweeney starting or having a relationship with anyone at this point.

But aww, I missed this, helping each other with our sick, twisted fics, me getting sneak previews that no one else got. I wish I was still into the one that I was writing before, the Jump Street one, but I seem to have gone off the fandom entirely. I've got another one in mind, but it's for another one that I dunno if you're into. Have you ever seen Farscape?

[st_minority]

No Fred?! Aw! He will be coming in, I'm pretty sure. No matter how much you love that Sweeney/Razor comfort. That's gotta be uncomfortable/weird. I do agree with having more emtion there when the razor comes out.

I miss it too! I wish I had more ideas coming so we could. I don't have any sneak peaks for you at the moment; well, there's a little I've written for the next chapter of Cleansing, but I'll keep it to myself. :)
I have no idea what Farscape is. Never even heard of it. What is it? And you have to get back into the Jump Street fandom!!!!

[spookyfbi]

Well, the Swazor comfort wouldn't be literal. I mean, he wouldn't be hugging the razor. I guess he'd just be cutting people's throats and it'd make him feel better, he could imagine the Judge while he's doing it, which he already sorta does anyway, I think. But oh well, let's see how the Fred thing goes.

Bah! Oh well, I'll get to read it eventually.
Farscape is a show. :/ obviously... Uhm, it's a sci-fi show that started in 1999 and had 4 seasons, so it's finished now. One of the bad-guy alien species, one of the bad-guy things they do is rape people and do genetic experiments on their offspring. So... y'know... perfect fic opportunity there...

[st_minority]

Okay. Then it wasn't you I once talked to about Sweeney fucking himself with his razor, then. lol

Woah! What?! Is there a scene of this raping people? I'd have to see it!

[mysweetprince2]

maybe if fred and sweeney knew eachother but hated eachother, then fred finds sweeney after the rape and their relationship starts to change through the hurt/cofort process?
Also, have you thought about maybe involving 19th century madhouses? because they were horrible and freakish, and ofcourse sweeney belongs there really :P either that or in the equally horrible freakish prison ship going to australia XD angst potential either way :D
Great chap. PLEASE more soon! catch me on msn some time x

[st_minority]

Hmm....that could be an interesting way to go. I'll have to think about that one.
Ooo, I know they were horrible! They would serve as a great backdrop! :D I was actually planning on Jack ending up in an asylum in Lost in Translation. ;) They're pretty wild places.
Yes, I'll try to catch you on msn. :)

[mysweetprince2]

omg yeah jack in an asylum :P I need more LIT xx

[st_minority]

Oh yeah. With a possible head surgery thing happening. Like, hammering things into his skull like in From Hell. Eesh. :)