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kalikahuntress September 26 2008, 18:11:23 UTC
Oh man, I love you, this is frakin' awesome. This how you do crack and keep in character Heroes, please learn this one day.

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squills September 26 2008, 18:19:48 UTC
Thank you! I thought it was amusing, but you never know whether other people will agree. I'm glad you liked it!!!

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greyelveneyes September 26 2008, 18:32:52 UTC
BEST. STORY. EVER.

If I quoted my favorite parts, I'd totally be quoting most of this. I loved that there are history lessons and "what-ifs" and the most amazingly awesome crack-but-still-in-character-characterization.

PETER: “Okay. Look. If we built a large wooden badger-”

Monty Python reference FTMFW!

AND

“I’m not gay. Seriously. What are you doing to the timelines that makes people think I’m gay?”

LMAO. I totally lost it at this point. And then every point after that where Mohinder is still sleeping with Sylar. SO HILARIOUS.

+mem, liek whoa

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squills September 26 2008, 19:42:00 UTC
I have NO IDEA where the Monty Python reference came from, but once it appeared in my brain, I couldn't stop laughing at it. So I figured, SOMEONE else out there would have to find it funny too! LOL

I'm incredibly glad you liked it! XD

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brandinsbabe September 26 2008, 19:02:46 UTC
OK, you completely win at life. this was the best story ever

MOHINDER: “Boyfriend? What...” [turns to Peter] “I’m not gay. Seriously. What are you doing to the timelines that makes people think I’m gay?"

that had me cracking up for a good minute lol. oh man, im still laughing. thanks for this :)

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squills September 26 2008, 19:43:51 UTC
Poor sweet Mo. He can be so clueless sometimes, I kind of pictured him having that kind of reaction...

"What? You're not Zane Taylor, you're Sylar?"

"What? The Company lied to me about working on the virus?"

"What? I'm gay?"

I'm glad you enjoyed it! XD

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etoiledunord September 26 2008, 19:51:01 UTC
LOL!!!

I, like everyone else, loved Mohinder's bewilderment at being gay, but you putting it into context like this makes a frightening amount of sense. XD I think I laughed harder at this little bit than I did at any part of the story, and that's sayint something. =D

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brandinsbabe September 27 2008, 03:24:43 UTC
LOL yes, that is completely him! aww mohinder <3

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widestance75 September 26 2008, 19:16:30 UTC
So happy to see fic from you pop up on my flist! SO HAPPY!

This was hysterical perfection, truly. I don't want to quote the whole thing, so I just picked 3 lines.

Peter, how many times do I have to arrange for you and your brother’s deaths before you accept that I know more about saving the future than you do?” Loved it!

“Boyfriend? What...” [turns to Peter] “I’m not gay. Seriously. What are you doing to the timelines that makes people think I’m gay?” Oh, Mohinder. Denial.

Your oldest brother was inconsolable.”
MOHINDER: “About his death? Or about him marrying someone else?” HEE!

This was just great! I really love the concept of these 2 traveling through time messing everything up. :)

Love!

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squills October 1 2008, 15:35:51 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I thought it was hilarious, but that doesn't necessarily mean other people will think it is. I just can't believe how many slashy comments I managed to fit into a story that is actually gen and doesn't have any actual romantic scenes in it... XD

Thanks so much!!!

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etoiledunord September 26 2008, 19:54:32 UTC
My first reaction: Squills fic! Yay!!

My second reaction: Ooh, sounds interesting!

My third reaction: Wait, what? Crack? Huh.

Every reaction after that: LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!

This was brilliant. I scared my (mostly deaf) dog with my laughter. This historical detail was particularly amusing. Somehow, I get the impression that Peter wouldn't really consider stuff like that. ^_^ And poor gay Mohinder. Too good. XD

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squills October 1 2008, 15:37:16 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! And I apologize profusely to your poor dog. XD

Every so often, my brain gets into a crack mood, and I can manage something like this. I'm just relieved that other people thought it was as funny as I did!

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