~ The Make-Up ~ (after the argument fic) ~ Mature JaeHo FanFic
Hey all this is set at the end of my fic: The Argument.
~~~~THE MAKE-UP~~~~
Author: Spudacus
Length: One -shot
Rating: Mature - NC-17
Pairings: JaeHo/YoonJae
Genre: Smut, lemon, sex.
Summary: Yunho and Jaejoong have to make up properly after their argument, with, what else!? MAKE-UP SEX! :D ehehhe
(Btw I am totally Rubbish at writing these summaries ( Read more... )
~~~~THE MAKE-UP~~~~
Author: Spudacus
Length: One -shot
Rating: Mature - NC-17
Pairings: JaeHo/YoonJae
Genre: Smut, lemon, sex.
Summary: Yunho and Jaejoong have to make up properly after their argument, with, what else!? MAKE-UP SEX! :D ehehhe
(Btw I am totally Rubbish at writing these summaries ( Read more... )
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i told u tt u'd make up for it with ur story:p
hehehe....
i just have one thg to say...
i love it!!!!!
when yunnie said tt he's gonna give it to jae good...i assumed tt yunho wld be serving jae....u kn...to blow jae and him fuck jae....
but u did it kinda the other way...and jae rode yunho!!!
omg...tt was the best version of jae riding yunho tt i've read....it was just simply awesome.....i kn i felt it..hehehe....
keep it up baby:p
and sorry if i bothered u too much..too much stress at work..haiz..needed somethg to get my mind of it..and i could only think of u.................................
the thing abt writing a series...i think u have 3 potential storylines to turn into a story... the party, the wedding and the argument...they're all good...i think me choosing one is doing injustice to the others...haha...but i think i like "the party"..cos u did involve the dbsk parents in tt story..so u can make use of them too...and the whole fanservice issue and what not....:p
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no, no you didn't bother me at all! :D hehehe
but just consider that everythign has been pushed back a little bit tohugh! :D heheehsorry but umm yeha i will try to stick as close as i can to my schedule but im not keeping any promises on that though! :D ehehehe
and oooh okay i see hmmm hmm yes i see, thank you for your good suggestions! :D hehehehe and that one with the parents and the party etc soudns like a really good idea! :D so thank you for that! :D ehhehee
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you wrote that very well, it was good to see them get over things in a brillently explcit way
i love the way the argument makes the make up so much more meaningful and theres a good sence of forgiving and understanding between them. you make the couple fit so well and the discription you used is great. you have a great imagination. and as always your fanfics dont dissapoint. keep up the great work
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again thank you im glad you liked it! :D
aww thank you Kira! :D
and that was so well structured thank you, it was a nice and smart comment to get ehehehe! :D
i will do!
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