FIC - Five Things

Jun 16, 2009 00:08

TITLE: Five Things
RATING: PG
SUMMARY A prompt of "five things that never happened" so basically, five things that never happened to Spock (XI version).
AUTHOR: breebree16
WARNINGS: Angst actually.

Amanda has packed all their things )

rating: pg, .author: breebree16, fan: fanfics

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ryuugazaki June 16 2009, 04:20:18 UTC
Really fascinating glimpses into "what could've been"! It's fascinating how even the smallest of actions may change the course of history and life as someone knows it.

"Daddy, it's dark down there, she can't see."

Oh man *Clutches heart*

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skywaterblue June 16 2009, 04:22:09 UTC
;____; I am too traumatized to comment. Oh my god, the first one, but oh my god, the third one, but ohhhh gooood the last one.

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featheredraven June 16 2009, 04:28:13 UTC
Oh, wow. These are all fantastic. All very melancholy, but good at the same time.

I love the third one, even though it's so horribly sad.

"Daddy," she sobs uncontrollable into the spot between his neck and shoulder. He tightens his embrace. Others at the service begin crying even more at the sight of a father trying to comfort the daughter. "I want to wake up."

"Me too," he answers with quivering lips. "Me too."

Gah, this made me tear up...

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mariole June 16 2009, 04:32:37 UTC
Ooh. Cool selection!

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spiderwebb June 16 2009, 05:12:42 UTC
the last one, GAH! it's for reasons like these that keep me reading fic.

thank you for sharing!

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