:: The Lord of the Rings ::

[pendora_lass]

This is an LOTR fanfic I wrote as a school assignment for my British Literature class last fall. Our assignment was to write a one page (*ahem* Yeah, I went a tad bit over that *cough*) story illustrating a common aphorism or saying. As I love to jump at the chance to do anything hobbit-related, I decided to have fun with the assignment. Choosing

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[grey_wonderer]

LOL I loved this. I can see Pippin stringing the beads for Diamond. After all, with all of those sisters I am certain that he has made a necklace or two before this one. Very entertaining story. I like your Merry.

[pendora_lass]

Hee, thank you :) And yes, Pippin definitely has a "sensitive" side....the youngest and the only lad....:-P I'm glad you enjoyed the story...thanks for the feedback :)

[nazgilly21]

Okay, fulfilling my promises:

This is, as should be expected, perfectly lovely. I love how you captured that child-like-ness that so utterly defines Pippin! Quintessential is exactly right! Plus, the run-on sentences and the utter nervousness about proposing makes Pippin seem like an anxious schoolboy, getting up the courage to ask his favorite girl to the school dance - SO adorable!!

I only read this today, but I saw it yesterday and it completely lightened up my day, just knowing there was a lovely bit of fanfic awaiting me! ^.^ Thank-you!

[pendora_lass]

Pippin seem like an anxious schoolboy, getting up the courage to ask his favorite girl to the school dance

Hee, I hadn't thought about it that way before :-P Glad to hear you liked the story, Gilly...and you are most utterly welcome...writing/posting it was my pleasure :)

[azaelia_took]

Awwww. This is totally adorable! I love the ending, though I do feel quite sorry for Pippin in spite of his cheek--it's obvious he's completely overwrought at the very idea of asking Diamond to marry him.

I loooooove happy hobbit fics!!! :) It's been a stressful few weeks, and this certainly brightened up my evening!

[pendora_lass]

Aw, thanks 'Zaelia :) Glad to have brightened up your evening.

it's obvious he's completely overwrought at the very idea of asking Diamond to marry him.

Hee, yeah, in spite of his perky personality, I figured the thought of asking for a lass' hand in marriage would frightening even Pippin :)