Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 1/4
anonymous
November 14 2010, 18:06:33 UTC
The day is hell.
He feels hot and itchy and wrong the whole day at school, and by the time he has to go to work-part-time at the nitro factory, trying to get ahead in the ranks early since his family won’t be able to pay for any more schooling after he graduates-he’s considering calling in sick. He doesn’t, though. He’s only got two sick days a year, and he’s not going to give one up just because his kid brother said it might be okay to stop taking his pills. God, he’s an idiot.
“God, I’m an idiot,” he mumbles, watching a line of pills roll by on the conveyor belt, the logo on each one smiling mockingly up at him. Yeah, what an idiot, he can almost hear them laughing, and seriously, he’s going to go insane He manages to make it out of work without having a breakdown, and he legs it back home as fast as he can
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Everybody Wants to Change the World 3/4 derp derp I know how to change titles
anonymous
November 14 2010, 18:08:35 UTC
He knows what kissing is, knows their parents do it sometimes, but that’s always a quick peck on the cheek or lips, not like what Mikey’s doing now, leaning in and putting a hand on the back of Gerard’s head and sucking on his lower lip and Gerard can’t move, just freezing up and waiting for Mikey to back off, because this was weird.
Not bad, though. Just weird.
Mikey finally leans back after a minute and says, “Y’know, you’re supposed to kiss back.”
Gerard just stares back, mouth hanging open, trying to find words he usually doesn’t have to search for.
“Gee,” Mikey says, snapping his fingers in Gerard’s face. “Wake up. There’s kissing going on. It’s kind of important.”
“Uh,” Gerard starts, and Mikey seems to take that as acknowledgement that he’s still self-aware, because then he’s leaning back in again, grabbing Gerard’s shoulder and shoving his-his tongue in Gerard’s mouth. What
( ... )
Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4
anonymous
November 14 2010, 18:09:43 UTC
He gasps out Mikey’s name a few times, but it just degenerates into a drone of vowels and hitched breaths as Mikey strokes both of their cocks with one bony little hand, and it’s difficult not to just buck his hips until Mikey falls off the bed.
Mikey’s whispering in Gerard’s ear again, and it takes him about a minute to notice and another minute to start putting meanings to the words, but he finally picks it up around “-back of the club, and he just got on his knees and sucked my dick, do you have any idea how-god, wanna do that to you, Gee, you need to feel it, it’s so
( ... )
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4violin_roadNovember 15 2010, 06:01:02 UTC
I have no idea why I stayed anonymous above, because seriously, I want to back my effusive praise with my name, here. I am in love love love with this universe, and I can't wait to see the full process, how discovering masturbation eventually leads to being on the run in the desert! Please, please, keep going ♥
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4
anonymous
November 15 2010, 06:30:53 UTC
eeee THANK YOU AGAIN. Sexual rebellion is really interesting to me, probably for all the wrong reasons, but I'm definitely trying to make sure it's more of an actual means of fighting against BLI rather than just "IT'S A KINKMEME EVERYTHING NEEDS PORN."
Frank's is going to be interesting, I think. I've never written his POV before, and I already have sort of an idea of how it's going to go, so it should be fun. I really like writing in this verse, so hopefully I'll be able to stick it to the end. Awesome comments like yours keep me going <3
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4itsthequietoneNovember 19 2010, 04:18:15 UTC
It just keeps getting better! It's all so new to them, and it's like they're waking up from a cloudy dream into a world of sensation, and we get to see it with them. Great job!
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4
anonymous
November 19 2010, 04:23:27 UTC
Heee thank you so much! When I first saw the prompt I was like "THIS IS MY DRUG KINK AND MY REPRESSION KINK ALL ROLLED INTO ONE, THIS IS GREAT \o/" but it kind of turned all plotty on me. That's what I get for coming straight out of never writing porn before, I guess.
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4gala_applesDecember 17 2010, 04:48:10 UTC
I'm sorry it took me so long to read this, but this was fucking AWESOME! I really love Gerard's immediate reaction being WE NEED TO TELL EVERYONE, LETS REBEL AND SAVE THE WORLD! and Mikey's the logical one that's like "that's really not gonna work". Are you still considering doing Frank? (and Ray???)
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4
anonymous
December 17 2010, 04:52:43 UTC
LATE COMMENTS ARE BETTER THAN NO COMMENTS, YOU'RE THE BEST.
But yeah I kind of. Have put Frank's bit on hold for now? I still have it open in a document, but I am writing this other Killjoys fic that ATE MY BRAIN and is currently 17k words and counting, so. It could be a little while. But I really love this universe and would love to keep playing with it, so it'll happen! Eventually! Possibly once finals are over.
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4gala_applesDecember 17 2010, 22:48:11 UTC
dude, that's awesome! if you ever feel like deanoning i will totally follow you with glee and eat all your fic. (eat plastic surgery? blow an artery? [honest to god, i can't think of the word eat without thinking plastic surgery, and then all the lyrics start]) the 17k, whatever the details, or Frank learning about his options.
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4teh_slushDecember 17 2010, 22:50:25 UTC
Ehhhh fuck it, I only anon'd in the first place because it was my first porno and I was embarrassed and I told the only person I was really hiding from like, a week after I posted anyway.
Re: Everybody Wants to Change the World 4/4gala_applesDecember 17 2010, 22:57:48 UTC
*snorts* fancy meeting you here! lol. But yeah, great fic, you totally can't tell it was your first time writing smut. And of course i'm interested in reading this 17k of killjoys *grins*
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He feels hot and itchy and wrong the whole day at school, and by the time he has to go to work-part-time at the nitro factory, trying to get ahead in the ranks early since his family won’t be able to pay for any more schooling after he graduates-he’s considering calling in sick. He doesn’t, though. He’s only got two sick days a year, and he’s not going to give one up just because his kid brother said it might be okay to stop taking his pills. God, he’s an idiot.
“God, I’m an idiot,” he mumbles, watching a line of pills roll by on the conveyor belt, the logo on each one smiling mockingly up at him. Yeah, what an idiot, he can almost hear them laughing, and seriously, he’s going to go insane He manages to make it out of work without having a breakdown, and he legs it back home as fast as he can ( ... )
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Not bad, though. Just weird.
Mikey finally leans back after a minute and says, “Y’know, you’re supposed to kiss back.”
Gerard just stares back, mouth hanging open, trying to find words he usually doesn’t have to search for.
“Gee,” Mikey says, snapping his fingers in Gerard’s face. “Wake up. There’s kissing going on. It’s kind of important.”
“Uh,” Gerard starts, and Mikey seems to take that as acknowledgement that he’s still self-aware, because then he’s leaning back in again, grabbing Gerard’s shoulder and shoving his-his tongue in Gerard’s mouth. What ( ... )
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Mikey’s whispering in Gerard’s ear again, and it takes him about a minute to notice and another minute to start putting meanings to the words, but he finally picks it up around “-back of the club, and he just got on his knees and sucked my dick, do you have any idea how-god, wanna do that to you, Gee, you need to feel it, it’s so ( ... )
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thanks for continuing this.
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Frank's is going to be interesting, I think. I've never written his POV before, and I already have sort of an idea of how it's going to go, so it should be fun. I really like writing in this verse, so hopefully I'll be able to stick it to the end. Awesome comments like yours keep me going <3
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I can't wait for more it's amazig!
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But yeah I kind of. Have put Frank's bit on hold for now? I still have it open in a document, but I am writing this other Killjoys fic that ATE MY BRAIN and is currently 17k words and counting, so. It could be a little while. But I really love this universe and would love to keep playing with it, so it'll happen! Eventually! Possibly once finals are over.
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Good luck with your finals!
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lol, hi.
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