Fic: Snowed In (Sam/Dean - NC-17)

Dec 23, 2013 17:47

Fic title: Snowed In
Pairings: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC17
Word count: 6545
Warnings: incest, explicit sex that isn't amazing, older Sam & Dean (ages 40/44)

Summary: Based on the prompt "snowed in". There's an epic snowstorm in Kansas. Sam and Dean are stuck in the bunker, doing the gardening and cooking, arguing about climate change, having average ( Read more... )

sam/dean, spn fic

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masja_17 December 24 2013, 09:18:34 UTC
Thank you for writing this awesome fic! Sweet and loving but relaxed. This is really hoe Sam'n'Dean should spend their days!
Loved it!

Merry Christmas!

<3

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sonofabiscuit77 December 27 2013, 13:17:10 UTC
I agree! It should totally be like this :D

Thanks so much for reading & I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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missyjack December 24 2013, 12:18:38 UTC
I love this peek into their future - and the way they are so snarky annoying brothers to each other even when their fucking. Excellent read!

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sonofabiscuit77 January 4 2014, 23:11:32 UTC
I love the brotherly moments too! Thanks for reading and leaving such lovely feedback.

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riyku December 24 2013, 12:26:45 UTC
!!!!!!!

Oh how wonderful. Thank you so so much. Older, domestic versions of the Winchesters is one of my favorite things in the world, and you've hit the nail right on the head. The way that they will always be brothers first and foremost, with their bickering and teasing, robes and spectacles and thick wool socks. Sam's creaky joints and his enjoyment of gardening and dishes and all the regular everyday stuff, how he sinks into the mundanity of it (and how he's grown to be more like Dean in that way--brilliant). The imperfect sex (yes yes yes!!!) and Sam's nostalgia, all those memories of desperation and life on the road with his brother had me grinning hugely, as did all of your small nods to their past, Dean's scars, Greek gods and all.

I love that quiet little moment they share, Sam hugging his brother from behind, Dean's awkward pat on his hands that says that he gets it, and this: I love you, he wanted to say again, and, It's okay, it's not like that for us. What we have isn't like that. What we have is good and I ( ... )

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sonofabiscuit77 December 27 2013, 14:44:14 UTC
Thank you for the wonderful prompt! And of course having many likes and dislikes which are so similar to my own ;-) I have to admit that writing this fic was a complete indulgence for me, so I'm really glad and relieved that you liked it.

I love your point about the boys continually seeking each other out in the bunker. It didn't even occur to me that I was writing that, but now that you say it, I can see that you're completely right and it makes such perfect sense. I always love that no matter what Sam and Dean do, they always end up coming back to each other, and I love that while that makes me feel all warm and happy inside and shows how much they love each other, it's also very symptomatic of their co-dependence and how stifling and powerful that love can be.

I hope you had a lovely Christmas and HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

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kazluvsbooks December 24 2013, 13:37:31 UTC
Loved every word. I could have kept reading all day.

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sonofabiscuit77 January 4 2014, 23:12:23 UTC
Thank you! What a great comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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ex1led_nyer December 24 2013, 13:38:14 UTC
I have 3 words for Sam: raised garden beds. :) Which is a testament to how great this fic is, that I totally bought into the domesticity and had sympathetic knee pain. And yeah, after 20+ years of sex together it wouldn't be as hot as when they were young and it was new, but the love is there, the affection is there. As is the still occasional twinge of guilt or doubt about the incest. Thanks for the lovely glimpse into the future.

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sonofabiscuit77 January 4 2014, 23:16:02 UTC
Lol, thanks for the hint re the garden beds! I'm actually a big fan of badsex in fic, so that was pure self-indulgence.
I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting.

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