Interphase: Gap Zero

[sonic__love]

_____When my brother died, he was no longer a human being. The second word is a verb, and conveys movement, active participation in existing. The pictures of my brother capture a brief spark of life, stilled breath: smiling childhood boy with blonde hair over the eyes, to the lurch towards brooding adulthood captured in a yearbook portrait. Who

Comments

[green_invader]

Amazing
I love the line: "Mangled? I think of my brother now as a body, the shrapnel left behind as his soul exploded from its narrow cage. A helix of bone, blood, hair."

[nextstop_bliss]

brilliant.

[torchthedresser]

Beautifully written my dear but one must never forget their biology.

[sonic__love]

you can forget this dick

how's that for biology?

[torchthedresser]

Suck it.....

Hows that for biology?

Thats what I learned in biology atleast......

[anonymous]

brahm died?

plz comment back

[green_invader]

Ive never known Brahm to drive a Buick, also he just signed on the intarweb. I take it this is a work of fiction and hes perfectly fine.

[sonic__love]

who is this and why can't you spell out the word 'please'?

i must say, i don't like the stalker-ish implications of someone who knows my brother reading my journal, and commenting.

anyway, it's fiction, friend.

[plesiosaurusrex]

i had a similar confounding incidence of some anonymous commenter who somehow knew mr. gaslowitz. perhaps they're one and the same.

...mom? ew.