It turned out really well. Did you think of the dynamics between them when you were planning the outline for the story, or did it come to you when you went along with the writing? I just thought about how I probably haven't read a lot of Frikey... I like the Mikey POV in this one, it's pretty deep and it really helps you get the flow of the intimate interaction between them. :)
I'm being wordy, probably because I've been reading old journal entries and realised I miss being wordy.
You should definitely be more wordy more often :) I just thought of it as I was writing. I'm so glad you liked it. I wanted to put a little angst and realism in there among the romance and domesticity. And deal with the Frank/Gerard thing without brushing it aside, at least not completely. That's the kind of stuff you have to deal with in their situation.
You know how I feel about Frikey, it's not really my thing but this was gorgeous. I loved the mellow intimacy of this and the dreamy quality and of course the peacoat :D
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I'm being wordy, probably because I've been reading old journal entries and realised I miss being wordy.
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