Ahem. *tries not to drool* So, I feel very fangirlish right now, because I actually squealed when I saw this was a sequel to Inevitable and Insane... I loved those two. And this is a gorgeous successor to both. Thanks!
awww...thank you! Seriously, the fangirl image totally made my week. You have no idea. In a total 'awww shucks' sorta way. I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully, I can finish the rest next weekend. Provided work doesn't stress me out too much before then.
A sequel to the Laura/Bill stories you wrote - I'm so excited! The "TBC" was one of the best parts of the story - knowing that there is more to come. The story itself was H.O.T.! I love how you describe the details so intimately and as if we are privvy to their inner thoughts. It's so well scripted. I like the idea that their first time wasn't what either of them expected and wasn't romantic or sensual but was more primalistic and needy. I think that is more realistic. You wrote it so eloquently and captivating! They've been waiting a damn long time for that moment and it seems that they'd react just as you wrote the story. I also adore you for the part after the sex. I love when stories continue and the characters talk afterwards. It makes it feel more real and like a true story - you don't just have sex and then nothing. Stuff comes after. With Laura and Bill, they've got a lot of 'after' to deal with. So, I was beyond pleased to see that you dealt with the after. Now I can't wait for the "TBC" to see what else you
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I'm glad it seems real. I find I think about that kind of thing a lot when reading. And it's probably one of the reasons I always hated fairy tales and (most) Disney movies as a kid. cause, you know, you have your grand dramatic moment...and don't get me wrong, those are all well and good...but is that it? cause life is the in-between bits. and nothing ever goes the way you plan it, no matter how well you script it out in advance in your head. sometimes people react in ways you never would have imagined. and sometimes things just happen...clearly, I've got a healty dose of Bill in me.
anyways, I'm glad you liked it. hopefully I can get the second half to work. i'm very tough on my writing so it's always and adventure :D
Being tough on yourself is good. It forces you to do your best work. Or at least being an over-achiever has always pushed me to do better. I actually prefer that. Then when I'm done, I know I've done my absolute best - even if in perspective it sucks. LOL.
I'm a perfectionist myself. so the writing process usually goes...think about it, write it, type/edit it, think it's ok, reread and loathe, get outside opinion, come to terms. annoying as hell but on the bright side it really makes you think about things. and stuff usually comes out better as a result.
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*runs off to write more porn for mmom*
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oooh! yay! porn! :)
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anyways, I'm glad you liked it. hopefully I can get the second half to work. i'm very tough on my writing so it's always and adventure :D
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Oh, and, bring on more Laura and Bill smut!!
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yay smut indeed. so very shiny
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