Fancy dinners & Foreign films

[snoaz]

Title: Fancy dinners & Foreign films
Character(s) / pairing(s): Jiyong / Seunghyun
Rating: PG
Word count: 2859
Note: Inspired by everyone's favourite scene in Healing Camp. Also, shamelessly incorporating all my favourite gtop things, because that is what fic is for isn't it?
Summary: It's not like he was lying -- he just withheld certain

Comments

[snoaz]

Thank you, thank you!

:D

[arsinen]

I giggled and so expected at the end for this line 'BUT the dishes still needed to be washed.' 8P

This really did make me smile.

[snoaz]

I suppose that would have been a good ending line as well, yes :p

Happy to have made you smiled! Thanks for commenting :D

[la_geni]

OMG SO CUTE

[snoaz]

:D

Cute was what I was going for, so that's good!

[atenais_pala]

I read it last night, before to sleep and it was a great reading. I like the way things looks so natural between them. Even the kiss, looked almost as a joke.

(In the end there was less movie-watching and more of a whole lot of other stuff. Jiyong was completely ok with that.)
You're such a teasing. But somehow I believe they were just playing and joking. Nothing really serious.

[snoaz]

:D thank you!

I'm glad it seemed natural, because I wanted to portray them as good friends even though there's something else there as well.

And as for what happened after, well, seeing as I left it open everyone's free to interpret that herself! :D

[lovelyable]

this is super cute! i like how you started from an irl event, and how both of them are just super uncertain and kind of awkward and hopeful at the same time. i think it could do with more specifics on what he cooked - just like how he went with dwaenjang because it reminds gd of being at home - specifics on top's home-cooked meal would've lended a hand to more sentimentality - or if that's too cheesy - it could at least be a conversation point. plus enrich the cultural aspect of being in korea and all. but that's just my two cents on something small, bc this was still really warming to read. aslkdj sorry it took me so long to comment :D

[snoaz]

I'm honoured getting a review from you! :D

both of them are just super uncertain and kind of awkward and hopeful at the same time.
That's kind of gtop in a nutshell, tbh. Strange how they can blend comfortable and awkward in their interactions with each other, haha

Thank you for your input! I always like it when an author includes detail in their story, so yes, looking at my own writing it definitely could have done with a couple of more details. I'll keep that in mind for the next story! (I'm a bit afraid, I suppose, of getting things wrong if I mention things Korean, but then again, Internet's your best friend. :-)