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Aug 26, 2010 14:20

From: danikos_realms
Title: THE BEST SMILE
Rating: R
Summary: After risking life and limb for his village, Sasuke returns to find that his supposed ‘haven’ has found himself a girlfriend.
Warnings: SasuNaru; Naruto/OC; fluff; strong language; mentions of violence; slash; not AU yet, but I bet it’ll be soon.
A/N: I’d like to thank Mi once again; nobody deals ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: r, submission: fic

Comments 8

eris4 August 26 2010, 21:14:06 UTC

Whooa. Nicely done!
I liked how you built the tension. And LOL, Michiru being a copy of Sasuke... I loved that! XD It's something I'd expect would be happening in the manga =P Even the SasuSaku relation was well-written.

danikos_realms September 6 2010, 17:35:37 UTC

konamoo August 26 2010, 23:20:50 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you! I loved every piece of it ♥
I can't believe you made something this amazing with my silly prompts! I didn't want to give you a hard time I'm sorry!
I so wanted a fic :D and you wrote this perfect one! And also it's incredible how you understood exactly what I wanted to see in Sasuke! I loved both of their personalities X3
I want to know who you are! Thank you so much ♥

danikos_realms September 6 2010, 17:39:53 UTC

naruchu August 27 2010, 04:17:06 UTC

Definitely oldschool, with sexual tension and jealousy and misunderstandings and angst and 'It's always only been him!'. Lovely. And sort of SaiSakura as a side pairing, YES.

I really liked Sasuke here. His concealed compliment of Sakura's abilities, his rather humourous POV, his damned pride and insecurity, were really fun to read.

Nothing had ever felt as sweet as that, and he suspected nothing ever would, because that was the first kiss Naruto had ever given Sasuke.
wibbling. so much.

danikos_realms September 6 2010, 17:43:01 UTC

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danikos_realms September 8 2010, 18:05:19 UTC

anonymous October 10 2010, 00:24:03 UTC

You ended it so dang abruptly ha ha ha, I loved it! It's brilliant to see Sasuke so insecure, possessive and downright bastard-y the whole way through LOL

Aww thank you so much, I love the facials you gave each...I could so picture Naruto's facials of uncertainty, jealousy and denial through Sasuke's games.

Michiko was hilarious, I really, like Sasuke, wanted her to be a b3ouch but the fact she was brilliant, jealous and bleeping logical was even better and I'm glad neither one was hurt.

Really wish it could've been longer though - but that's just cause am selfish and greedy for psychoSasuNaru LOL