Comments | smilesofalover: Warmth

candielover93 in smilesofalover

Warmth

Nov 15, 2008 14:27

Warmth
G
Angst
OT5 gen; Changmin-centric.
Takes place after MKMF 2008, where Changmin cries.

( as he feels Jaejoong’s tears drips onto his hair, he lets go of everything, the disappointment, the confusion, the bittersweet happiness, and simply cries, accepting the warmth and comfort of his family. )

fandom: dbsk (2003-2009), length: oneshot, rating: g/pg, genre: general, focus: changmin, pairing: none/general (dbsk), genre: angst

Comments 27

music3chick November 16 2008, 06:24:53 UTC

I actually did not cry until now.
You portrayed exactly how they would act.

♥

candielover93 November 17 2008, 05:18:52 UTC

Aw, I'm sorry :\

Thanks for reading! ♥

silhouettedwing November 16 2008, 17:10:22 UTC

oh, changmin. ♥ this was really sweet and really beautiful, and you portrayed the boys so well.

candielover93 November 17 2008, 05:19:19 UTC

Thank you for the compliments and thank you for reading! :D ♥

hana_kiree November 16 2008, 19:06:12 UTC

This is soooo...AWESOME!!!!! Especially the part after they finished crying and Changmin being his 'old' self again... Aaahhh...good job!!!

candielover93 November 17 2008, 05:21:55 UTC

Ah, thank you :)

Thanks for reading! ♥

doma_arsonica November 17 2008, 03:02:29 UTC

Ahh..so sad, yet so sweet. The interaction with the five of them is just warming..and affectionate. And when Min starts to crack sarcastic remarks..that's just so realistic. It's something that he'll do in a situation like that..at least I think so. =] beautifully written.

candielover93 November 17 2008, 05:23:32 UTC

I think so too (:

Thank you for the compliments, and thank you for reading! ♥

rhapsodygunshot November 17 2008, 05:50:18 UTC

....fucking beautiful -cries-.
do you know i love you?

candielover93 November 17 2008, 05:52:08 UTC

..that was fast reading O_O.
ilu too, bb :D ♥

rhapsodygunshot November 17 2008, 05:58:45 UTC

i read good fics fast >XD
-glomps- ~~

candielover93 November 17 2008, 06:02:40 UTC

*blushes* My writing isn't that good, lol, when compared to rain-streaked and kallistei
*glomps you back* :D

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