Selena/Demi fic. Uhm, I forgot the title...

Nov 07, 2009 22:18

Oh wow, I apparently have a thing about writing fic when I'm kinda drunk.  Go figure, right?  Seriously though, my poor spell check almost broke with this and it's rather confusing plot is hurting my almost hung over head, but whatever.  I wrote it, so I'm gonna post it.  Excuse the mistakes and read at your own risk.

Dutch courage, or how Selena got drunk on eggnog and went to get her girl! )

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vivianey November 7 2009, 21:29:15 UTC
I really liked that.

Drunk fics..
Christimas fics..
they get me every time :)

I think you wrote of their entire relationship pretty spot-on too.

THIS: "Selena wasn't stupid, she knew that Demi cared, maybe even as much as she did, but Demi had always wanted approval from everyone... Demi fought demons that Selena never had to, but that didn't mean she didn't understand..."

I think this is exactly what happened between them: "... I suppose part of the problem was that we never talked about it, huh? We just hinted and assumed and then everything fell apart..."

Thank you for this fantastic fic :)

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slowprogress November 9 2009, 17:22:07 UTC
Thank you very much!

Glad you liked it and that through my alcohol haze I at least made a little sense to you in this fic;)

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vizallati November 7 2009, 22:33:26 UTC
This fic is made of awesome.
:O

It's... I can't think of a word to describe it. I mean, drunk Selena is hilarious. And she's pretty sweet too which is uber-cute with Demi caring for her and the two of them talking how they kind of just grew apart and how they missed each other. This was seriously adorable. And lmao at Selena and the lasting effects of the eggnog. And This line-- "Ignore that, I think it's the last of the eggnog that was talking there. I mean we've barely sorted this out, haven't probably said half of the things we should have and here I'm trying to, I don't know, get you naked." It cracked me up. Then the r-rated stuff ensues... What a wonderful fanfic. Lol.

Maybe you should get drunk more often and write at the same time. Jk.
;P

But I seriously loved reading this fic. I hope you write another one!

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ginnyus November 9 2009, 01:31:23 UTC
AMEN. haha. if this is you drunk, then by all means, DO get drunk and write for us every once in a while. :)

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slowprogress November 9 2009, 17:26:30 UTC
Aw, thank you!

Yeah, I couldn't help but think that Selena would be a FANTASTIC drunk! She just seems like the type that would get seriously shit faced on very little and end up doing giggle worthy crap.

As for getting drunk more often and writing? Well, it is almost the holiday season...I mean how else does one get past spending so much time with your family? Getting drunk is part of the tradition!

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giveloveaway18 November 7 2009, 23:36:15 UTC
IA.

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slowprogress November 9 2009, 17:28:47 UTC
Thank you!

Yeah, as much as I'd love for them to spend Christmas like this, I really would settle for seeing them at least acknowledge each other or something in public.

I miss them being friends:(

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tashamiller2k November 8 2009, 00:41:24 UTC
Very sweet reconnection for the girls.
Loved it.

Hehe drunk Selena is amusing, , I honestly didn't think I'd be such a stereotypical slutty drunk. This blows.”

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slowprogress November 9 2009, 17:30:59 UTC
Glad you liked it!

I'm pretty sure Selena would honestly be a completely awesome drunk, it's always the straight laced ones that are!

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theatrebob1 November 8 2009, 01:13:18 UTC
HI. I LOVE YOU.

This is the most adorable, heart warming, hilarious, amazingly written, heart wrenching fic... ever. About them.

I-honestly this made my night, not gonna lie. This was just like... fucking perfect. And Drunk Selena, i just need that to happen all the time. And the way you wrote the lurv scene was beautiful

"Selena can't help but take a few seconds to just smile to herself. So this is love, she thinks, and turns her head to kiss soft skin, to feel life and blood and Demi pulse against her lips, and this is love making."

GAH.

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slowprogress November 9 2009, 17:35:53 UTC
Ugh, your icon always has me staring dreamily at my screen for a good five minutes...

Anyway, just wanted to say thanks for the rather lovely comment! Glad Selena didn't come off as a complete boob while drunk, because drunk me had waaaaay too much fun writing her!

I'm glad I got the sexin' right too, though to be honest when I started it was gonna be plain smut, but I pretty much fail at writing smut so it got all 'emotional'. lol.

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