So Close

[skyfang]

The world seemed to stop.

She stared at him. She could not move. She could not breathe. She just stood there, straight and rigid. Her eyes were wider than they had ever been before. In a random moment, her hand would jolt slightly a reflex her brain sent to tell her that she was still alive.

He stared back, with his impossibly green irises

Comments

[icebitten]

That was so pretty~
I loved how in detail everything was.

[13mirror]

"...despite the people around her, she never felt so alone in her life." - aww, left me breathless! I really like this piece, well described feeling. =3

[bifacial_ler]

Oh, so wonderful... Such a kiss is really a time-stoping experience.))

[moonlight1314]

Prettyful... Keep it up or I'm come after you with a butterknife and there is NO telling what Mr. Birdy'll do if you don't. <(*v*)>

[icyblu24]

Very very good. I like how you are getting inside those moments and describing feelings. XD Keep it up!