Fic: Into you like a train. (Used, NC-17, 9200 words)

[sinsense]

Into You Like a Train
Used -- Jepha/OFC -- 9200 words -- NC-17

algernon-mouse emailed a rough couple of paragraphs to me about Jepha getting pegged for the first time, and I wrote her back the first draft of this. She and secrethappiness liked it, so I decided to turn it into something longer. helluvalot did a first round beta, and secrethappiness brought it home. Any remaining mistakes are mine

Comments

[helluvalot]

i love the ending you added!! and the sex is punched up and perfect. so very nice. i wish christina was real.

[sinsense]

Thank you! And thank you again for the excellent first round beta; this would have been a lot less complete without you. I hate typing out the whole narrative, but hey, I hear it's good for readin'.

Christina is pretty much every girl I had a crush on in high school, natch. Bitchy and too cool for me. I can't help it if I have a type?

[sinsense]

Dude, lately all of my comments have been failcomments, it's fucked up. "LOL THIS WAS GREAT THX 4 WRITING IT" is pretty much what my brain provides on the first run-through, unfortunately

[turps33]

I enjoyed this so much.

I've read very few The Used stories, but the description attracted me, and I really like your writing so I gave it a go. I'm so glad that I did.

[sinsense]

Thank you so much! I'm a huge fan of pegging, so I was hoping people who share my kink (which is so pathetically obvious) would take the risk. I'm glad you did, and that you liked the story!

[yan_tan_tether]

So, this is absolutely the fic I've been wanting to read ever since I heard about the Jepha and pegging thing.

Really, really gorgeous. Christina is awesome and I adore Quinn's reaction at the end; showing his love by matter-of-factness and going for pancakes. ♥

[sinsense]

...sorry, I was distracted by your icon. What?

I'm really glad you liked the story; I've been a little nervous about this, since I feel like original characters are just a big sign saying LOL PROJECTING over the fic. It's entirely possible that I was, but I figure I'll aim for a solid lol projecting story, at the very least. :D Thank you.

[unprolific]

oh, quinners. i love his bitchy ass best of all. EXCEPT NOT; i love jepha's better. really this is all kinds of fantastic, you've got me smiling like a loon.

[sinsense]

I need to write Jepha/Quinn at some point if I can ever get over my ridiculous OTPness because they're such loldorable douchenozzles together.

Anyway: loonsmiling! Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it, that is awesome.