Iconography Fic: Girl Talk

[sinisterf]

My first attempt at femeslash, I blame this on my Iconography Challenge icon, and coffeejunkii the, Chlana cheerleader :D Feedback of any sort would be much appreciated.

Girl TalkFandom: Smallville

Comments

[xandyrd]

Woohoo!! I likes it a lot! You rock Shnoogie beans!

I hope your night is going well. :-)

[sinisterf]

it is going ok...I wish I could go home, I want to write but this place kills my muse :(

I went hom early yesterday...so I can't leave today :(

How are things with you?

[xandyrd]

I'm sorry that you aren't feeling well. :-(

I'm at work. I hate the analyzers. I still don't feel that well. I wanna go home as wel.

[sinisterf]

so how come you went to work? It is against the law for you to be at work for at least 4 days after being diagnosed with strep...

[coffeejunkii]

*fans herself*

still recovering *g*

very nicely done!! a story about this icon could have led to all kinds of unpleasantness (whiny!lana comes to mind) but yours is very, er, enticing :)

you have my admiration for plunging into the smut head-on. i already feel the anxiety for chlana's first time in my story setting in, and it's at least a chapter away.

[sinisterf]

Yay! I got the Coffee seal of aproval *does a dance* That is so cool, I was actually worried what you might think of it. I have come to associate Chlan with you from the begining so this does mean alot!

As for the smut, it just kind of took me over! It's Chloe, she makes me want to be a naughty naughty girl :P

In any case, have no fear you do a wonderful job with your story and I have no doubt that you will tackle the sex with the same style and skill :D

[coffeejunkii]

thanks for the compliment! i shall tackle the sex and hopefully, it comes out well. i've gone through various scenarios in my head and some sort of work. we'll see.

i feel so honored to be associated with chlana in your head :). it's funny because i really was a die-hard clexer (and i still very much love the boys!!) until i saw misty's chlana vids. and then i had this image of lana on chloe's doorstep, and the rest is history. i think my muse speaks in chlana to me. but in the next chapter of my story, clark and lex will feature prominently!

[xnitelite]

Ohhhh! I admit I'm not a big Chlana fan, but I had to read this, B. Wow. Loved the way the way you gave us a peek into Chloe's mind and how conflicted she feels about Lana at times. Not that I blame her. *g* You capture the tension between them very nicely! As for what happens after their little discussion about the boys at the Talon. Woo! *fans self*

Btw, your LJ color scheme and font size look good to me!

[sinisterf]

I admit I'm not a big Chlana fan, but I had to read this, B

Thank you for giving it a chance Nite! I am totally not a Chlana fan either, hell Lana drives me nuts! But for some reason this bug hit me and demanded to be written.

Wow. Loved the way the way you gave us a peek into Chloe's mind and how conflicted she feels about Lana at times

I was glad to have a chance to take a deeper look into Chloe, she is a very interesting character so it was not only interesting for me but fun to do too!

As for what happens after their little discussion about the boys at the Talon. Woo! *fans self*

Hee!! So glad that the sex scene was not wierd, I have never written any femeslash...or even really read any so it was pretty much new for me!

Thank you so much for the kind words Nite, you feedback on this really brightened my day!

Oh and thanks about the new layout, I am glad that it works out for my LJ friends :D