Comments | sinisterf: Smallville Ficlet : Breakables and All

sinisterf

Smallville Ficlet : Breakables and All - Hard R

Oct 03, 2006 21:02

I know I promised this would be ready last weekend, but I was running a bit behind. This is for xnitelite, hope you don't mind the roughness of the story, it is riddled with my usual grammatical/stylistic mistakes unbeta'd and probably too short.

Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: Hard R

( Breakables and All )

pairing: clex, ch: sv clark, sv fic, nc17, fan fiction, ch: sv lex

Comments 15

Squeee!!! xnitelite October 4 2006, 05:45:43 UTC

Wow!!! B, you outdid yourself! Talk about the perfect diversion for Lex's workaholic ways. What I wouldn't give to see the expression on his face. Not to mention Naked!Clark lounging in that chair. *wibbles*

"And don’t argue, because I’ll win." The red glint moving up and down his hard length with each stroke of his hand.

Gotta love that red K. Oh yeah...

This was so worth waiting for. Thank you!!!! :)

Re: Squeee!!! sinisterf October 4 2006, 15:22:11 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it :D

Re: Squeee!!! xnitelite October 4 2006, 22:49:48 UTC

I loooooved this! Don't be surprised if I beg ask for a little sequel. *g*

Re: Squeee!!! sinisterf October 6 2006, 05:26:30 UTC

You probably wouldn't need to beg *g*, gradeafan had a wonderful suggestion below of how the story should proceed. Perhaps I'll find the energy and time sometime soon to expand apon it a bit :D

yavannauk October 4 2006, 11:30:34 UTC

GUH! Um, there's really nothing I can add to that. LOL!

sinisterf October 4 2006, 15:23:03 UTC

Thank you! Guh is totally what I aiming for :D

xandyrd October 4 2006, 13:20:43 UTC

:) Very nice and very well done. :)

sinisterf October 4 2006, 15:24:01 UTC

Thank you shcnoogie, BTW would you mind helping me clean this up a bit? I am probably going to post it on the smallville slash site but want to fix any mistakes first.

xandyrd October 4 2006, 16:23:11 UTC

:-) You're welcome!

I don't mind at all. In fact, I didn't see a whole lot wrong. The only thing that stands out is near the end you missed the word 'ring' or something. I'll look at it again when I have time today.

geneli4 October 4 2006, 13:56:24 UTC

mmm.... very nice!!!

sinisterf October 4 2006, 15:24:14 UTC

Thank you!

gradeafan October 4 2006, 14:04:36 UTC

Wow!! There will be kneeling on the other set of knees now won't there?!!

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sinisterf October 4 2006, 15:25:11 UTC

Most likely so, and damn does that make me want to add that in there! Grr... must not touch the completed fic, must. not!

gradeafan October 4 2006, 15:36:31 UTC

This fic is fine and complete....but see I'm just begging for a sequel...::nod::

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