Fanfic: Love [R] {Naruto}

[sindacirwen]

Title: Love
Rating: R
Realm: Naruto
Characters/Pairing: Hidan, Kakuzu, Sasori [KakuHidan, KakuSaso]
Warnings: language, graphic violence, implied sexual situations
Word-count: 580
Genre: Angst, drama, romance *shifty eyes, sorta*
Notes: A sister fanfic to “Time” - you should have read that before reading this to understand some of how I think when

Comments

[thegreenbinder]

'Scuse me, but love doesn't have two syllables. It has one. Or have I been pronouncing it wrong all these years?

[sindacirwen]

Ah, depends on whether you think of pronouncing it the Japanese way (ra-bu) or the plain English. I was thinking of the Japanese way of saying the word, and to get more smoothness in the text.

For the next time you comment - please add something you actually think of the story instead of just commenting on the faults. Ever heard of the word constructive criticism?

- L -

[thegreenbinder]

Well, jeez. I didn't like the story very much. I started reading it, but the fact that you said love was two syllables immediately jumped out at me and I didn't have the time to read the rest of the story. I sort of skimmed it, but even then, I don't want to go over and properly read it. :|

[momoiro_usagi]

That...was AWESOME! *_* Wow! I really like your writing style, and you captured Hidan PERFECTLY! I'm also quite interested in KakuSaso right now! XD I've never thought of that one, but it sounds really hot! (NOT IF IT HURTS HIDAN, THOUGH! D:) But really, nice work! ♥ I really enjoyed it!

But yes, love only has one syllable! :/

[sindacirwen]

*blushes* Thank you :D I'm happy that you like it!

Ah, I was actually thinking of the Japanese phrasing of the word; where it's pronounced ra-bu ^^;;

KakuSaso is one of my friend's kinks, and I write it for her ^^;; I'm flexible, but I privately prefer KakuHidan in front of KakuSaso.

*goes to change the story*

- L -

[kaitou_taco]

somehow it fits the song I'm listening to XD
nice one
also, KakuSaso is love °_°

beautifully written : D

[shail_666]

I really like that. I've been in a complete KakuHida kink lately, but this was great. =D

I read over the comment at first and instantly went D:! because come on. < 3 *CLINGS* IT WAS GREAT. :D

And KakuSaso, I've thought fo that pairing a few times; What a kinky pair.

[sindacirwen]

Naaaw *blushes* Thank you for appreciating my story :D Well, it can't be helped. You can't like all the stories you read, now can you?

KakuHidan is my new OTP. Can't help it, but I love it.

Yeah, KakuSaso is a creepy pair. My sister is a total fangirl when it comes to those two, so I snuck in a bit of that for her sake.

Thank you once again for the comment ^^ I'm working on more stories, and I'll up them in the Akatsuki_love community once I'm done.

- L -

hydrogen generator fuel

[anonymous]

I like idea behind your post. I want to read more from you. Your thought process is unique and effective.