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simtopi June 6 2010, 03:47:13 UTC
I'm glad that you did! Thank you. :)

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dreadful_minx June 5 2010, 19:28:19 UTC
sAGE =<3
That was really fantastic!!

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simtopi June 6 2010, 03:47:49 UTC
Thank you! :)

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leapsbarnes June 5 2010, 19:39:03 UTC
BIG ASS COMMENT! Because it's been too long :)

Samantha and Kimberly's conversation was just...so touching. I think this might be one of your best chapters, I mean, in this chapter I really noticed an improvement in your writing, technically and emotionally. And as always that scene was staged so brilliantly. I really like the Cordial sisters. It's cool how they have different light alignments but they still love each other so much. It's so touching *tear* lol.

THIS is the pimpest picture ever. I've just fallen in love with Rowan. Seriously. Hot as hell ( ... )

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simtopi June 6 2010, 03:55:09 UTC
Jessie, it is always so awesome to see your comments here. :D Woooooooo!!!

Anyway... I've always enjoyed the Cordial sisters. I couldn't resist bringing them to Simtopi and actually having a scene with them together was really fun. I'm happy you think my writing is getting better... I try. I've been influenced a lot by some really great sim fictions I've been reading and must catch up on.

Haha, Rowan with a sword. Totally couldn't resist it. :D

Like, how does Sage (who is cute as a button. Cuter than even.) know it's Willow?
Hmmm... intriguing ain't it. ;)

What's going to happen to Willow and Wesley? Why didn't he want her to use her magic?
Probably because he didn't want her to do something hasty when Samantha might have been able to help her. And of course, he doesn't really know what's going on at this point or what's happened to her.

And yes! Zombies are another aspect of the game and popular media I'm really having fun with. :D

Thank you for commenting!

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simtopi June 6 2010, 03:59:03 UTC
:D I'm happy you enjoyed it. I'm flattered. I just say it was ridiculous because I managed to stuff so much in there and even "cheated" rules a bit to make things work for the story. I like using the all encompassing excuse "oh that was magic" for everything unexplained, lol.

Thank you for the compliment too... I don't know if I'll ever be a published novelist. Like I said earlier, I think I just got lucky with this story. The sims really help me out a lot. :)

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simtopi June 6 2010, 04:07:31 UTC
Haha, well you know I'm just glad you guys liked it. It's hard for me to objective about my own stuff. I can pick out a lot of my mistakes and I'm my own worst critic. :)

Carl was fun. I've always liked that Maxis face (the "Remington" face, lol) because it's so expressive.

The zombie battle was really fun for me, posing and writing it. I enjoyed it a great deal. But anything zombies is always fun, lol. I absolutely could not resist giving Rowan a sword. That was pure fun. I'm also glad you liked the battle between Sibyll and Clara.

And sure, feel free to ask any "how'd you do that" questions. I don't mind answering them. I'd post more behind the scenes if I'd actually bothered to take screens of it. :)

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