Chapter 4

Jul 09, 2009 23:22


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4: The Invitation


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collidingwithme July 10 2009, 15:03:58 UTC
Omg... that last shot broke my heart. Willow! What happened to you? :( :( :(

You know, I really love how you compare the past and the present, putting them side-by-side, flowing together. It really shows how much the past impacted Willow, and supports all the decisions she's making now. I don't know if I'im rambling, but I just wanna say, great job!

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simtopi July 10 2009, 17:58:17 UTC
Don't worry, as you can see, Willow is fine in the present. :D

Thank you for the kind words!

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leapsbarnes July 10 2009, 15:39:09 UTC
Great chapter! I'm really enjoying Willow's story, it's really fascinating. It's just so sad that she got left in some random place. I'm curious to see what's up with that. :) I had Jasmine and Cecelia confused for the longest time, I thought Jasmine was the older one, but now I understand she's not. lol. So that makes these chapters make a little more sense. :) Anyway, fantastic job!

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simtopi July 10 2009, 18:02:28 UTC
Thank you for reading! :)

You were right initially, Jasmine is the older sister. I'm pretty bad with Sim ages, but Jasmine is approximately 2 years older than Cecilia. Sorry if that's confusing. You might also be mixing Cecilia up with Carrie Thomas which is my fault too... those scenes in highschool were shot before Cecilia even grew to be a teen and I had just randomly selected someone from the Sim bin to be Willow's "bully". In retrospect, I shouldn't have made her blonde.

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leapsbarnes July 10 2009, 18:06:15 UTC
Oh no, I didn't mix her up with Carrie, I was just confused about which of the sisters was which. Now I feel silly for switching them up again! lol. I wasn't sure who was the teen from before, but that's...Cecelia? Yes, okay that makes sense. Especially since Willow is older. Ahhh, I get it now. Awesome, glad I got that cleared up :)

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simtopi July 10 2009, 18:25:29 UTC
Haha, it's okay. Seriously, Sim ages bug the heck out of me. I'd make them all the same age if it'd make sense, but then I'd be retroactively affecting the legacy timeline, which i didn't want to touch really.

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eastvale July 11 2009, 18:32:46 UTC
I hope Willow is alright! I have a feeling those girls ended up seeking revenge and putting her there. :| I hope not though!

Raven and Wren are super cool looking, I love their outfits and glasses. Your pictures are just as amazing as your writing. :)

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simtopi July 11 2009, 23:11:36 UTC
Thank you! I love Raven and Wren too, i couldn't resist adding them to this story. I won't say much but yes, those girls aren't very nice.

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iridium_soldier July 12 2009, 21:52:52 UTC
Oh, poor poor Willow :( . The last scene is really sad, and... I really like Miss Cordial :) . I just hope it's just talent or something, where you get these things from, than from personal experience.

I love SimTopi, it's so awesome! Zombie apocalypse! :D

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simtopi July 13 2009, 15:08:59 UTC
Well, when you try to imagine a situation, I think most try to pull some things from personal experience but Willow and I are nothing alike, lol. In the case of this story, I just try to tell the story the best way I can. :D

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. If you're fan of the Cordials, you can play them in Belladonna Cove (if you have AL). :)

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inkdroppings July 16 2009, 10:14:04 UTC
The part about secret society members being "hard to fine" (cue secret society members entry~) had me in stitches. You either planned that or had amazing luck!

Miss Cordial might be psychic, but I'd like to think she also knows what catty bitches in high schools are like. Poor Willow ;_;

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simtopi July 17 2009, 20:27:15 UTC
It was mostly luck... those bloody townies kept trying to sneak their way into the scene, but in this case, it was lucky. :)

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