Fic: Defensive Position

May 18, 2009 19:43

Title: Defensive Position
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: Morgan, Hotch, Elle, Reid, gen
Prompt: written for fuggybear, with the prompts "Morgan's initial impression of Reid and/or Elle" and "AU featuring Morgan."
Summary: Dr. Morgan gets a visit from the BAU.

Defensive Position )

fanfic, criminal minds

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luckinfovely May 19 2009, 02:52:54 UTC
Dood. You had me at Nurse Hawthorne.

OMG BEST SURPRISE EVER.

And now, I read. <3

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luckinfovely May 19 2009, 03:08:02 UTC
Dood. Your mood worries. *concerned face*

As for the fic of AWESOME, some highlights:

Greenaway didn't actually say "duh," but it was heavily implied.

Your Elle? Is love. Smart ass LOVE.

"Reid talked him down," she shrugged. "No biggie."

I repeat: LOVE.

Oh, man. I heart this so much -- the way that, even though Morgan is a different version of the guy they've worked with on the show, they still click & clash in the same ways. BECAUSE THEY SO WOULD.

I also really love that Reid isn't as wordy as usual, and that Elle is totally a mother hen, in her own special way. And OH BUT THE SUBTLE REFERENCES TO REID'S MOM, given the setting, is friggin' wonderful. And I loooooove that THIS Morgan notices, when maybe the one on the show might have chalked it up to skittishness.

IN CONCLUSION, I am fan. A fan, I am. A fan who spams, because she can, can, can. (You're welcome.) <3

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shinealightonme May 19 2009, 18:50:38 UTC
Re: mood being worrisome: suffice to say, college is going to be the death of me.

I love that you love my Elle. She deserves all the love she can get, and she is so fun to write. Morgan here was tricky to strike the right balance with, so I'm really relieved that it worked out right for you! And spam, especially rhyming (assonance...?) spam, is always welcomed here ^_^

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luckinfovely May 19 2009, 22:31:19 UTC
You will LIVE!

Your Elle is exceedingly lovable. As is your Morgan, tricksy or not. :D

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idonmatrix May 19 2009, 03:29:42 UTC
Great fic!! Can't wait to read more :)

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shinealightonme May 19 2009, 18:51:07 UTC
Thank you! Not sure if there's going to be more but glad you liked what there is.

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nagi_schwarz May 19 2009, 03:40:58 UTC
Intriguing. I'm often leery of AUs in this fandom, but this is rockin' awesome, and if you wrote more I'd be all for it. I don't get satisfying glimpses into Morgan's mind very often, and this is fantastic.

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shinealightonme May 19 2009, 18:53:13 UTC
Well thanks for giving this AU a chance! Don't know if there will be more but there might.

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shinealightonme May 19 2009, 18:52:32 UTC
Hm. I've found a way of making Morgan even hotter? I wasn't aware that was possible ^_~ Glad you liked it, hon!

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shinealightonme May 19 2009, 22:14:58 UTC
Well there is that. Rawr.

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jujuberry136 May 19 2009, 13:58:34 UTC
Really awesome AU here. I love Morgan's observations of Reid (noticing his unease in the hospital and Elle rushing to get them all out) and Morgan and Elle still have the head-butting going on.

Really fun read! Thanks so much for sharing :D

I'm keeping my fingers crossed for more!

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shinealightonme May 19 2009, 18:55:39 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. There's a possibility for more but I'm afraid I can't make any promises.

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