Fic: Negotiation (Firefly, Mal, Kaylee, PG) 1/1

[shetiger]

Title: Negotiation

Comments

[inlovewithnight]

::small squeal of delight:: Oh, how CUTE! That's an awesome Mal voice, and such a good, bad little Kaylee. :)

"Only the four of them..." ::giggling:: Hee. And Mal getting stuck with the dishes.

Great stuff.

[shetiger]

Thanks! I kind of labored at this one, so I'm glad it came out Mal-ish.

And he just doesn't know what he's in for, does he? :)

(I need happy Firefly icons. All of mine are pissy. Must remedy that.)

[verstehen]

Such a pity he didn't say yes! Kaylee/Mal is my pet favorite non-canon pairing from that show. ;)

But this? This was lovely, the voices especially were spot on and Mal's reasoning was perfect (if disappointing).

[shetiger]

Mal's stubborn--he won't get into bed with anybody without a crowbar or two. :)

Thank you--I'm glad you liked it!

[ex_danvers514]

Ah, Mal. I've never felt the urge to see him shipped with anyone, but I liked the gentle flirting here ;-)

[shetiger]

I can see him having potential interest in several characters, but he's very stubborn with tons of issues. He didn't even want to be interested in Kaylee at all when I was writing this, but I made him. Ha! Writer trumps character, dammit!

Er. Pay no attention to the crazy lady. I'm trying to say thanks.

Thanks!

[jebbypal]

LOL!! That's great. You capture both Mal and Kaylee perfectly I think. Bravo and very very fun!

[shetiger]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked!

*looks at your icon*

Poor Mal. Did I make his head hurt with the sex talk?

[jebbypal]

LOL...yep..just like yosaff:)

[mosca]

I like this a lot. Your Mal voice is literate but still sounds very right. This is funny ( "What is it with you, woman? You looking for a soap opera?") in that slightly mean way that works well on the show, and yet it's really sweet, really honest. Nicely done.

[shetiger]

Thank you!