Fic: Fragmented Beginnings (Ronon Dex/Evan Lorne, PG-13)

[sheryden]

No one have a stroke, but I've finished a fic! As in done.

Title: Fragmented Beginnings
Author: sheryden
Rating: PG-13 (for violence)
Summary: Lorne and his team are hit by an ambush.
Disclaimer: Sadly, their not mine.
Pairing: Ronon Dex/Evan Lorne (pre-slash)
Author's Notes: This is friendship/pre-slash. It's a prequel of sorts to a Ronon/Evan slash

Comments

[semirose]

Aww this was great, I love the way you're building them up and oh poor Lorne *pets him* Fantastic, I can't wait for the main fic.

[sheryden]

Thank you. :) I'd love to get some more canon interaction between but until then, I'm having fun crafting my own connection.

[nelle_tenebre]

I wish I could write like that, in any language. That was a great prequel and I look forward to reading your main story! I really enjoyed reading it.

[sheryden]

Thank you! I'm having a good time trying to capture the voices of these characters.

[jett_chan]

My dear, you astound me. XD I was all excited to read your fic and by God you delivered! I love your approach to gaining ground for their relationship before-hand (something I've never had the patience to do, I'm afraid). And look at that: five in one. *wipes tear away* You've made this challenger very happy.

This is an awesome prequel, and I can't wait to see the rest!

[sheryden]

Thank you! The challenge actually helped dig me out of a hole I was in regarding the main fic (in particular, the backstory in the village). Yay! These two are so much fun to write for, though I did have to wrestle with Ronon's dialogue at first.

[jett_chan]

._. Oh, man. Ronon's dialogue makes my brain hurts like no other when trying to write it. I empathize, truly. XD But you did a fine job of it.

[infinimato]

Good voices, appropriately snarky when needed. Well done.

[sheryden]

Thanks! Snark is great fun to write.