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seramercury August 2 2008, 00:04:43 UTC
That was fantastic story. The imagery was amazing.

The date snuck up on me, LOL! I still have to make finishing touches to my fic! XD

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wildcat88 August 2 2008, 15:22:06 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked. Time is flying, isn't it? I've got another one due next Saturday that I'm pulling my hair out over.

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padawan_aneiki August 2 2008, 00:38:46 UTC
Ahhh very cool. lol My favorite lines out of the whole thing? Here:

“Come on, McKay. Where’s your optimism?”

“I had it surgically removed at birth, Colonel Sunshine and Roses. Makes for fewer disappointments.”

*giggles insanely* Nicely done. *claps hands*

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wildcat88 August 2 2008, 15:23:12 UTC
Hee! Snark rules! Thanks so much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

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moonprincessnat August 2 2008, 01:24:03 UTC
I really liked this. John's connection with Atlantis is a favorite of mine, and I loved the way you used the senses in the descriptions of the battle. And psychic injuries! (It's sad, really, how much I enjoy seeing poor John suffer for the sake of Atlantis.) Thanks for sharing. :-)

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wildcat88 August 2 2008, 15:24:49 UTC
Shep whump really does make everything better. Thanks for reading and I appreciate you letting me know the parts you enjoyed. Glad you liked it.

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scifigeek72 August 2 2008, 01:51:37 UTC
Great story. Thanks for sharing. Shame we didn't see the disorganized chaos afer Lifeline.

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wildcat88 August 2 2008, 15:26:42 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I would have liked to have seen the reconstruction, etc after everything slowed down, but alas... only 20 eps a season. Yea for fanfic!

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karri_kln1671 August 2 2008, 03:28:19 UTC
*claps* Well done! Lovely gene-ness! Beautiful team-ness. Just nicely put together all around. :D

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wildcat88 August 2 2008, 15:31:13 UTC
*bounces* Yea! Glad you liked. I'm happy to know it met your gene prompt. Whew! I enjoy the team together, and it's good to know it comes across. Thanks!

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