Noodles, part two of two

Jun 24, 2007 19:57


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"I told you I could do it!" Sandburg bellowed, glaring.
"Yeah, well, I told you, so could I," Ellison bellowed back.
"Moron! No-one was going to believe you were a civilian observer! You look COP when you're asleep. If we sliced you and diced you it would say COP on the little pieces. I bet it says COP on your underwear."
"It says Calvin Klein on ( Read more... )

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vamysteryfan June 24 2007, 19:22:17 UTC
Oh, fabulous! Loved the last two paragraphs. You always get their voices down so nicely.

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aerianya June 24 2007, 20:56:16 UTC
shuffled a little and looked down at the floor.
"I'm ALWAYS the bad cop," he muttered.

PRICELESS!
My favorite kind of story.

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laurie_ky June 24 2007, 21:22:20 UTC
This was great, and I'm including part one here. Blair steaming mad that Jim's been protecting him from dipping into the dark side to get to the bad cop place in his head.Blair seeing it as lack of respect for him as a cop,I think Jim sees it as being protective of his partner's mental health. Jim, whining about having to change, (and he doesn't like change,now does he) and Simon settling it.
Loved the line about the donuts, too. And the Calvin Klein underwear. You just know that the bullpen isn't going to forget that little tidbit.
Laurie

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Simon anonymous June 25 2007, 00:56:09 UTC
Simon has finally been driven insane. It had to happen sometime.

: )

Jaye

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noodles anonymous June 25 2007, 07:19:36 UTC
Ohh many that was sooo good. Totally light and funny even with the little bit of squeak mentioned.
Loved it!!!!!!!
Sentarla

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