Comments | sharlot1926: jai guru deva om: Within You and Without You (chapter 9)

sharlot1926

jai guru deva om: Within You and Without You (chapter 9)

Oct 02, 2013 20:04

Dean was warm and comfortable, tranquil-mellow.
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jj1564 October 12 2013, 23:32:59 UTC

That was deliciously painful! I hated Father for using Sam and John to torment Dean and I loved Dean for holding out for as long as he did, bless him.

sharlot1926 October 13 2013, 02:05:29 UTC

Poor Dean would have stayed in that hell forever if Father had posed no threat to Sam. It was the only thing that would do it. Very cruel (and shrewd) of Father to use Dean's love to break him. Makes me wonder exactly how Alastair broke Dean in hell.../shudder!

Thanks again, jj! Very, VERY sweet of you to leave all these comments!

Kat

serendip50 October 21 2013, 19:14:57 UTC

Dear God that was a horrifically grueling Ordeal ( ... )

sharlot1926 October 21 2013, 19:59:23 UTC

You know, when I started to write this chapter I THOUGHT that "Sam" and "John" being mean to Dean and telling him that they didn't love him would be enough to break him. I really did. I began to grow just as frustrated as "Father" in this chapter as I read and realized that there was NO way that Dean would break simply because of that. So I had to really think about it and only after much consideration did I realize HOW and WHY he broke. Funny how writing goes sometimes, huh? I had to write the chapter to find out what really happened, because what I had planned was all wrong ( ... )