Semper Fi by Isis

[isiscolo]

Title: Semper Fi
Author: Isis
Remix of: Fisticuffs by Zeelee (ficbyzee)
Rating: R for language
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Summary: Sorenson's a loyal Marine.
Notes: Thanks to my betas amanuensis1 and z_rayne, and especially to fabularasa who gave me the runs. Um. About 1200 words.

Comments

[ficbyzee]

AWWWWWW. Oh, this was just *adorable*--I love this guys' voice, I love the military point-of-view, and the reveal at the end, and the Batman and Robin refernce. Thank you so much!

[isiscolo]

Oh, MAN what a perfect icon to use for your comment! Hee!

I am glad you liked it. It was fun figuring out how to intersect your story at an oblique angle, so to speak, and I thought the original plot idea was pretty cool!

[3jane]

Fantastic voice!

[isiscolo]

Thank you!

[ladyvyola]

Semper Fi, indeed!

Loved it.

[isiscolo]

Thanks!

[bagheera_san]

The end is just - yeah. Cool. I liked the original and this is just the perfect companion.

[isiscolo]

Thanks very much. That was my goal - to make a story that complemented rather than retold the original, so I'm glad it worked for you!

And I am a big fan of the twist ending. Just call me O. Henry.

batman and robin :-)

[cathexys]

oh, i'm still giggling! i hadn't read the original before and loved it and yours was the perfect complement!!! the voice was excellent and "hell, I have a lot of sympathy, if he has to put up with that asshole scientist for a boyfriend" just had me laughing out loud...

very neat remix! thanks!!!

Re: batman and robin :-)

[isiscolo]

Thanks! You know I adore Rodney, but imagining how he comes off to other people - let's just say it was a whole lot of fun putting myself in Sorenson's shoes.