Comments | sga_flashfic: "Or Down Low" by lavvyan, PG (Left Behind challenge)

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"Or Down Low" by lavvyan, PG (Left Behind challenge)

Mar 18, 2006 12:19

Title: Or Down Low
Author: lavvyan
Rating: PG
Warning: Character Death
Notes: You can read this as a McShep pre-slash kinda thing, but you don't have to. For the Left Behind challenge.

( Or Down Low )

author: lavvyan, challenge: left behind

Comments 22

elliejane March 18 2006, 13:24:53 UTC

Oh. Oh. That is so saaad. Good but saaad. But good.

lavvyan March 20 2006, 09:48:52 UTC

thanks. and sorry.

sp23 March 18 2006, 15:50:46 UTC

::wibble::

I don't usually read deathfic, let alone like it, but this was very well done.

lavvyan March 20 2006, 09:49:15 UTC

thank you very much, i'm proud you made an exception for this, then. :)

anonymous March 18 2006, 16:45:59 UTC

So sad and yet so comforting at the end. Nicely done.

lavvyan March 20 2006, 09:49:24 UTC

thank you!

percysowner March 18 2006, 17:54:51 UTC

This is a beautiful piece, sad, and touching.

lavvyan March 20 2006, 09:49:35 UTC

thank you very much. :)

totally false advertising stop March 18 2006, 22:16:26 UTC

How can it be pre-slash if they BOTH DIE.

Um, but also sad and touching. Yes. Well-written. You're just a meanie for making me think that the character death wouldn't rip my heart out and stomp on it.

Re: totally false advertising lavvyan March 20 2006, 09:51:41 UTC

well, i thought the last moments could be viewed as a little slashy, but maybe that's just me. and i don't have a word for not-quite-pre-because-there-won't-be-a-post-slash.

um. so, sorry for ripping your heart out and all that. *picks it up and brushes the dust off* here you go. almost as good as new. :)