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itachibana13 in semecomplex

[fic] Sweet Dreams

Jan 04, 2010 23:04

Sweet Dreams
itachibana13
PG-13. drama, humor, sarcasm.
jongkey, slight onkey
9721 words

( mirror mirror on the wall, who's the craziest one of all )

rating: pg-13, fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/key, pairing: jonghyun/key, length: oneshot

Comments 85

intricateorchid January 5 2010, 05:27:51 UTC

WOW. WOW. OMG.
OKAY.
This was really original. And it was really twisted and sick and just fucking insane in some areas.
They were so in character and I just loved the dynamics of their relationship. I think the dialogue matched each characters perfectly. Really, really, amazing. At first, I was a bit taken aback by the length, but damn, you seriously must have sat and planned all of this out. Sometimes, fics like these reveal too much at once and sort of ruins the mood, but yours took so damn long, I loved it.
BUT OMG, POOR ONEW. :(

Loved the ending. Just perfectly perfect.

Thanks for writing and sharing with us! ♥ ;D

itachibana13 January 6 2010, 22:36:59 UTC

thank you so much~! ♥ ah, really? I was worried about that! lmao, and the ending. oh god, that took a whole week to think up! i'm glad you like it!

soasian101 January 5 2010, 06:25:51 UTC

OH TO THE EM TO THE FUCKING GEE.

This was so aSLDFKSLDFKASJDFADKJ. Seriously. Everything was so ingenious! The plot, the dripping(more like pouring) sarcasm, and the desperation of being trapped and wanting to get better but wasn't and loving Onew but having to kill him /SHRIEKS.

Where did you come up with such an original storyline? You. Are. A. God.

itachibana13 January 6 2010, 22:41:29 UTC

thank you~! :'D lol, i just couldn't let go of my sarcasm. thank you so much, :'D it was really just a 'omg, i got it!' moment one day.

flyfallcrash January 5 2010, 06:54:21 UTC

dfojokhdsfhkjhfdhjcs.

I LOVE YOU.

Honestly, at first, I didn't want to read this. I didn't but then it got better
and better
and better
and ogmsdffds

your story so unique and its;adlaksdj;lsdf mAKING ME INCOHERENT.
DO YOU KNOW THATS WHAT I LOVE FEELING AFTER READING?
OH MY GOD. SERIOUSLY. THIS WAS SO GOOOOOOD.

and...im probably not making anymore sense
but
i ship jongkey hardcore now.

itachibana13 January 6 2010, 22:43:27 UTC

thank you so much~ ♥ i'm glad you decided to read it. (: haha, don't worry you're making sense! and yes, jongkey is love.

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itachibana13 January 6 2010, 22:49:28 UTC

OMG TYPO. LOL, thank you for catching that! It's fixed now. :'D i meant to say 10/11 instead of 5/6.

:'DD thank you so much! ^^ ♥ lmao, the memory he inserted was all about onew.

aww, :'3 *hands you bandaid*

kisetsu_no_sora January 5 2010, 09:36:55 UTC

did i ever mention that i have a thing for insanity ward fics?

its just. so perfect. ilu.

itachibana13 January 6 2010, 23:01:22 UTC

lol, thank you! :DD ♥