#168: Pinkish Blue

Aug 30, 2016 14:00

From: louu113

Title: Pinkish blue
Rating: R
Word Count: 6,100
Summary: In the middle of the battlefield, hands cramped around his rifle, Sehun risks his life everyday, but all he can think about is Luhan. Luhan who he hasn't seen for 789 days.
Warning/s: World War I, use of arms, violence, mention of blood, death, sex scene.
A/N: Biggest shout out to ( Read more... )

round 5, 2016, fic, rating: r, length: 5k-10k

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dazed_belle August 31 2016, 02:32:08 UTC
oh my god where do i start. i love you author.

i dont usually comment but i cant resist when three of my favorite things ever are in one fic. hunhan, a beautiful mess, and war!au cries

this was absolutely beautiful. sehun's frienship with jongin had me in tears. i was about to cry when jongin said his last words to sehun ;;;;;;;

i love sehun's longing and how everything reminded him of luhan; it's like he tortures himself with the memories of him but somehow he was also hope like luhan was the one thing he could look forward to after the war ;___;

im sorry im not coherent enough but this fic was amazing. thank you for still writing hunhan and keeping our ship alive!! ;_;♡

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louu113 September 9 2016, 08:58:55 UTC
OMG!! I love you too !!! You have no idea how much you made me smile with your comment!! I'm so happy you liked it <3 War!AU is my favorite too, along with medieval!AU like Reign the tv show. I hope I did justice to the song, because it's precious <3 thank you so much !!

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anonymous September 1 2016, 06:16:18 UTC
both Jongin and Luhan scene had me nearly cried if it wasn't for the RnB song I currently played...................

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louu113 September 9 2016, 09:02:22 UTC
I almost cried while writing, too .. So heartbreaking :( thank you for reading <3

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issingu September 1 2016, 23:01:45 UTC
i thought the ending was going to be really sad, so i was trying to get myself ready for it.

now im so happy cuz it ended happily and luhan and sehun married each other ;-;

i loved how you switched from the present state and the memories TAT the story matched the lyric prompt so well too!!

good job, author nim!!

p.s. is daichi the daichi from haikyuu?? hahahahah

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louu113 September 9 2016, 09:58:33 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it <3
I'm a suck up for happy ending, I don't think I'll ever be able to end a story on a sad note :p I had to google haikyuu to see what it was. Ahahaha. I had no idea ... I actually got the name from "good morning call" a Netflix Japanese tv show (the only one I've ever watched :p) so you weren't totally wrong ;)

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junxouji September 2 2016, 02:02:12 UTC
Man, my heart hurts. Under normal circumstances I'm not a fan of 1st pov which is totally just preference but I REALLLLLLLLLLLY liked this. :')

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louu113 September 9 2016, 10:03:17 UTC
OH! Thank you soooo much <3 !! I'm glad you kept reading even though from the start there was something to put you off..

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anonymous September 7 2016, 14:44:42 UTC
Thank you for the beautiful fiction, I cried. The dates that Sehun's counting resembles the dates that HunHan separated since Luhan left. I feel sad but blessed with the hunhan reunion scene at the end.

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louu113 September 9 2016, 10:06:57 UTC
oooh I'm sorry I made you cry ;( but heyyyy they found each other at the end :) I'm sure in real life they never really left each other, those two are soul mates how could they? ;))) .. Thank you so much for reading <3

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