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rephen December 6 2009, 13:23:28 UTC
Despite their being were-people, the set-up and ending were very homey and close to heart. Well-written, I enjoyed reading it. The interactions between the characters were nicely done, their personalities came across vividly. The twins were very easy to like, in particular. Naughty but nice.

And the last sentence is very heart-warming.

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selkie_queen December 6 2009, 23:08:03 UTC
Thank you so much. These characters mean a lot to me, they are some of the first characters I ever created. I love them all, but Jonah has a special place in my heart. I would love to write a book about them some day.

I was inspired for that ending because my sister is done with college classes and living to get out of finals and home for the holidays.

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shadowdream December 6 2009, 20:07:15 UTC
I adore this! More please! :) Well done. Love the characters and their interaction.

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selkie_queen December 6 2009, 23:08:43 UTC
I'm so glad you like them. I think I can find time to write more about Noelle and her twins.

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tangledwood December 6 2009, 22:36:44 UTC
This is wonderful — so many great ideas packed into one piece, and Jonah/Johan are really fantastic.

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selkie_queen December 6 2009, 23:09:25 UTC
Thank you. I have been playing with Noelle, Jonah, and Johan for years. I love them dearly so I'm glad so many people are enjoying them.

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selkie_queen December 7 2009, 18:33:23 UTC
Thanks, I did a little research for this and discovered that tigers, when drawn in Asian artwork, often have the word "king" written across their foreheads because the Chinese especially believed that the stripes there looked like they naturally formed that word. Cool huh?

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selkie_queen December 7 2009, 18:33:52 UTC
Thank you so much, so often I doubt how my dialogue sounds. This meant a lot to me.

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