Dreams & Whispers(Michael)

Oct 31, 2006 14:02

Title Dreams & Whispers
Author: miriel
Character: Michael
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Michael (02x18)
Written For: littlemimm, who wanted something on Michael as an individual.
Author's Note: This is a short piece, written as a 'filler' until the originally designated author wraps her fic up. Hope you like it ^_^

Dreams & Whispers )

michael, pg

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littlemimm November 7 2006, 19:15:52 UTC
First, sorry about replying so late! I did read this the day you posted it, and I meant to comment on it, but stuff happened and, well, I kind of forgot it.

Thank you so much for picking Michael -- I love that character so, so much. :) I also really liked this piece, Michael's feeling that he might not have even been alive for more than three days, the feeling that people around him fear him but try to hide it. He feels so lonely, poor guy.

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mardahin November 7 2006, 19:51:33 UTC
Hey, no worries on the late comment. I'm just glad you read it and liked it ^_^

However, I am totally blaming you for what I've nicknamed the "Trashy Michael Prison Romance" (Real title The Enemy You Know). I wrote your short, and then got to thinking about issues like Michael and who he sees himself as, and how others see him. And then I wanted to play around with something like common ground, except with Michael and someone who didn't know who he was because they hadn't been in Atlantis at the time. [/ramble]

Short version: I'm blaming you for the 10K word romance I'll be posting in the next week.

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lady_jenn_grace November 7 2006, 20:15:47 UTC
O.o

*loud applause*

I love it. ^_^ *bouncy bouncy* Good Michael piece. It captured the very essence of what Michael was probably feeling those first few days.

Good job!

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mardahin November 7 2006, 20:52:39 UTC
Thanks, it means so much to hear someone say that!!

This was my first Michael piece, and I'm glad it reads so well ^_^

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mardahin November 7 2006, 22:18:54 UTC
Thanks! I was glad to donate the prerequisite pint of blood to gain admission. Although those 'innoculations' made my skin feel kind of tingly *Shivers*

Hope to be posting more soon.

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musicoloredeyes March 3 2007, 02:35:58 UTC
This was great. This is the first fic I've read that takes place entirely within the first Michael episode before he learns what he is. I love the way you portray him. It's ironic how peaceful he is here.

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mardahin March 4 2007, 22:17:27 UTC
I think sometimes, the chaos inside the mind can actually grow so strong as to come out the other side and be eerily composed. There's too much that doesn't make sense, so his brain interprets as best it can, and the lack of telepathic contact comes through as silence. After all, the Wraith are a telepathic species.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the feedback.

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