Ficlet: Something White (Meerkat AU #2)

Apr 29, 2017 17:06

Title: Something White
Author: thenewbuzwuzz
Setting: AU based on Something Blue
Rating: T, probably (but it's a WEIRD T)
Word count: 412
Summary: Around two years later, Meerkat!Buffy and Albino!Cobra!Spike seem to be under a mysterious spell. Can their love transcend species?
Notes: Thank you again to seapealsh for language beta. And that's all from me ( Read more... )

era: btvs s4, form: fic, rating: other, creator: thenewbuzwuzz, genre: alternate reality

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sunalso April 29 2017, 14:31:47 UTC
Buffy chilling out (literally) on Spike's back is an adorable image and I giggled over Buffy wishing he had fleas that she could catch to show her devotion!

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thenewbuzwuzz April 29 2017, 15:44:16 UTC
*g* Thank you! Well, grooming is a crucial part of meerkat social life... (SO I HAD TO)

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sandy_s April 29 2017, 14:43:59 UTC

Lol...love the part about Buffy wishing he had fleas! And groveling and realizing that the babies weren't hers. You're doing a wonderful job blending the animal types with the characters!

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thenewbuzwuzz April 29 2017, 15:49:33 UTC
Thank you so much! :))
Re: "blending the animal types with the characters": I did a fair bit of agonizing over this, so I'm very glad to hear some of it worked for you.

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double_dutchess April 29 2017, 15:54:05 UTC
Wow, that was both sweet and amazingly, even kind of sexy! And educational on the cobra mating front -- I had no idea. (Probably best not to even try doing a Meerkat Smashed :-)

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thenewbuzwuzz April 29 2017, 15:59:15 UTC
It was? I hope not disturbingly so. And thank you! ^^
Hell no, I'm not up to doing meerkat Smashed! :D I wouldn't even do regular Smashed, so... the world is safe. Ish.

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double_dutchess April 29 2017, 16:33:25 UTC
Umm, yeah? (Oops, what does that say about me!) Not disturbing, but it was definitely different :-)

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thenewbuzwuzz April 29 2017, 17:09:47 UTC
Whatever it says about you, it probably already said about me. I mean, I wrote the thing. *g*

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freecat15 April 29 2017, 19:36:51 UTC
'wind beneath a goshawk’s wings' - lol!

And such a great reason for Cobra!Spike to have to stay out of the sun - an albino! Ha, also explains the white - um, skin. Smart!

I love how you manage to pick characteristics of each person and transfair them into charaseristics typical for the respective animal, and it really is recognizable who is who. I especially loved this:
'She fixed some landslides at the burrow entrance and then sunned in the slanting morning light, while her lover combed her hair with his big, manly teeth. ' - after Buffy did some work for the group to keep them all safe he tends to her and combs her hair (which he probably is obsessed with *g*)

Really loved these!

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thenewbuzwuzz April 30 2017, 03:36:15 UTC
D'awww, thank you! *g*
Thanks for telling me your favorite line! ^^ It's extra interesting this time, because you definitely have a deeper connection with that line than I did writing it. I love that it works for you!

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rebcake April 29 2017, 20:14:41 UTC
Her man was so strange sometimes.

Indeed. But they definitely manage to complement each other: he can cool her, she can warm him. Plus, the all-important sharing of the childcare!

Spike reminded himself what he was. A cold-blooded killer!

So you are. Yet, perhaps you don't really enjoy being alone with the eggshell corpses? Just a thought.

Nifty!

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thenewbuzwuzz April 30 2017, 03:37:48 UTC
Thanks! :))

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