Comments | scrollgirl: "Leave No Man Behind", SGA/SG-1, John Sheppard/Ronon Dex, AU

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"Leave No Man Behind", SGA/SG-1, John Sheppard/Ronon Dex, AU

Apr 15, 2011 06:26

Title: Leave No Man Behind
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ficathon:satedan_grabass, fic by scroll, fic:canon:sga, canon:stargate, fic:canon:sg1, fic:ship:john/ronon

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tesserae_ April 15 2011, 13:57:04 UTC

I loved this! So many beautifully observed moments, and the shifting point of view really works here - plus, Cadman playing Mary Magdaene for the Ori was priceless!

scrollgirl April 18 2011, 20:16:31 UTC

Hee! I originally wanted an Oscar joke, then realised a reference to an Easter play would be thematically more interesting. *g* Yes, I over-think these things.

tli April 15 2011, 18:07:21 UTC

Oh, that was wonderful! The details were spot on - from Rodney and John 'accidentally' forgetting equipment to Jack's cameo, and I loved John's slow adjustment to the SGC - and integrating Ronon into his team! The team building aspects with the Atlantis veterans were fantastic.

Thank you so very, very much for writing this!

scrollgirl April 18 2011, 20:19:09 UTC

I'm happy it worked for you! I love working with the larger SG-1/SGA ensemble, so the cameos were fun to write. And I love building on the team-as-family, which isn't just about the four-person team, but all of them. Thanks for giving me the prompts!

kristen999 April 15 2011, 22:04:25 UTC

Wow. The scope and imagination of this AU was gorgeous and choked full of emotion. I loved the beginning of Ronon's and Teyla's lives, fighting the Wraith and the clever twist that wiped them out. Poor John, his rocky adjustment to being Earthside was palatable and I loved Ronon's transistion as much as Miko and Cadmam's integration into the team.

Just a rich story with a wonderfully hopeful ending. Would love to read more in this verse.

scrollgirl April 18 2011, 20:22:45 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! I'm really glad the AU works for you, and the ascension twist. It was nice to turn my Thinky Thoughts about the Ancients/interference/Ori/godhood into plot for a story.

I'm tempted to write a sequel, but no promises!

fanficfan123 April 16 2011, 06:42:57 UTC

Enjoyed this crossover AU. The Satedan treasures sent by Teyla were an interesting, nice touch, as was Satedan writing being akin to Japanese.

scrollgirl April 18 2011, 20:24:09 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the Satedan touches!

fanficfan123 May 3 2011, 07:19:12 UTC

You're welcome.

fearless5555 August 5 2011, 00:11:30 UTC

This was lovely to read. I would really enjoy reading more from this universe with these characters.

scrollgirl August 18 2011, 04:26:57 UTC

Sorry for the late reply! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Maybe one day I'll write a sequel, because I really do love this AU...