Heroes FIC: Five Ways Nathan Petrelli Saves New York (and Sometimes His Brother)

[scribblinlenore]

Title: Five Ways Nathan Petrelli Saves New York (and Sometimes His Brother)Fandom: Heroes

Comments

[scribblinlenore]

Oh, so belatedly...thank you! I'm glad you thought this worked!

[capnzebbie]

These are wonderful! Ranging from creepy to inspiring :) Very well done, and you captured the characters perfectly.

[scribblinlenore]

Belatedly, thank you! I'm so glad you thought this worked. Nathan's need to protect Peter can be so touching sometimes and other times kind of scary.

[capnzebbie]

I think Nathan's need to protect Peter is all wrapped up in his need to control Peter, so yeah, both touching and scary.

[matryoshkarose]

This? Is awesome. I'm actually crying a little bit right now.

[scribblinlenore]

I'm painfully late in responding, but I wanted to thank you for the feedback! I'm so glad you found the story affecting.

[c_quinn]

They all work so well. Excellent.

[scribblinlenore]

I'm really late in saying so, but thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

[kattahj]

I liked this, all the versions. I think maybe my favourites were the second one and the last one - the last one for being so tragically beautiful, and the second for the interesting implications of killing your own ancestor. You make very good use of OCs too, both in that story and the one after it.

[scribblinlenore]

Very belatedly, I wanted to thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm so glad you thought this story worked. It was so interesting to ponder what Nathan might do, the lengths he'd go to, trying to save Peter.