Comments | scout_kent: SN Fic; One for the Money, Part Six ~COMPLETE~

scout_kent

SN Fic; One for the Money, Part Six ~COMPLETE~

Jul 17, 2007 14:07

Charlie sat on Casey’s lap as the police officer gently questioned him. Charlie started crying when he was asked if any of the hostages are hurt. "They hit Danny. They hit him with the gun, because he wasn’t sitting right, and kicked him really hard."

"When was this? Was he, ah, awake when you left?"

"Yeah, he was. It was right at the beginning, ( Read more... )

fic, sports night, danny/casey

Comments 8

hyperfocused July 17 2007, 20:07:12 UTC

Oh, perfect. ::hugs them both, a bit more gingerly with Danny, of course).

Now I want to read about the big reveal;)

scout_kent July 17 2007, 23:00:53 UTC

thank you!

hee, that is a fun conversation to picture, isn't it?

gothams3rdrobin July 17 2007, 20:29:15 UTC

Yay! I've been quietly frantic to read the conclusion to this - so glad Danny's okay! And Charlie was so brave!

I second the requested sequel, but then again I never want a story to end *grins*

scout_kent July 17 2007, 23:05:08 UTC

quietly frantic, huh? I'll take that!

I planned a bigger part for Charlie, but the little bugger wouldn't cooperate. He thought he did quite enough.

Oh, can I do it?! fizzerbass July 18 2007, 01:42:02 UTC

Can I plu-ease be the one to tell Rebecca that Dan and Casey are 2gthr4eva? Plu-ease! It's not that I want to rub her face in it or anything. I just want her to hurt a little bit. To feel like her heart has been ripped out of her chest, stomped on, flash-frozen, cracked with a sledge hammer, and the pieces incinerated in a 1000 degree fire. But I promise to be nice about it and offer her a tissue if she should shed a small tear or two.

Great story. I knew that Dan would Save The Day in some small way. And Charlie DID do something - he stayed quiet when Danny acted like he didn't know him and that was a Very Brave Thing indeed.

Are you sure there isn't more to this story?

Re: Oh, can I do it?! scout_kent July 18 2007, 02:00:38 UTC

Do it, yes, please! I would love for you to tell Rebecca aaaalll about Dan and Casey. (casey can gloat but dan has to be nice!)

I'm pondering a reveal follow-up, I really am.

suchthefangirl July 18 2007, 05:34:42 UTC

Well, the one thing that I didn't like about this was that it didn't go on. I want more more more.

You did such a great job with characterization. I loved how guilty Casey was, but also so very jealous of Rebecca. And Danny was all heroic on the one hand, and feeling like he was responsible for all the negative on the other.

I am so glad that Danny and Charlie both survived. I feel much better now.

So, now, just, you know, write some more..

scout_kent July 18 2007, 19:10:10 UTC

You just know that Danny thinks he SHOULD have taken down armed bank robbers with his bare hands.

hee, I love the idea of Casey being jealous of Rebecca, too!

can't write this week; I have 10 tween girls coming to my house on Friday for a party. (what was I thinking????)