"i've heard nothing if it wasn't the wind"

[scarletts_awry]

title: If It Wasn’t the Wind
with: Danny/Mac, Danny/other
rated: NC-17
herein: Mac dreams; Danny waits
disclaim: I only own the dvds; everything belongs to Zuiker, CBS, et al.
note: for all-hallows-fic; a part of the BSI verse; my tags || stellaluna_’s tags
thanks: to stellaluna--without her this story never would have gotten written

Comments

[ghostrunner7]

As much as any kind of MPRG squicks me, I will say that this line made me catch my breath:

He wonders how he can look Danny in the eye during the day knowing what his own unfettered subconscious does with Danny’s smile at night.

[monkeyfun1]

Wow. If I didn't know better I'd say I was reading someone else's writing. This was so unlike you. Except it wasn't. You still manage to get their voices to be true. You have this way of getting them to tell the truth regardless of what situation they are in. You know Mac doesn't do flowery, You know Danny isn't a wimp and Stella doesn't stand for either one of the two to back down.
The concept of the LoD being in the business of hunting the supernatural is very interesting. I like it. I like that they would know and understand the world of the Winchester brothers.
This was an exceptional story woman. Kudos to you.

[seal_girl]

I came a cuising by from all_hallows_fic.

My total knowledge of the fandom can be summed up in one word - Nothing.

But that didn't stop me enjoying this fantastic story. It was a compulsive read, excellently written.

*reads, avidly, for fish*
Sealgirl

[stellaluna_]

Through all of our discussions on this, I think you know how much I love it, but I want to say that again here: I really, really love it. Okay, I still sort of can't believe you made me read mpreg, much less *like* it, but. I love the bone-chilling visceral fear that bleeds through every single word of this, and I especially love the dreams, as well as both of the scenes in which Mac visits Danny in his cell/hospital room.

Also, this has given me a couple of thoughts on future BSI storylines, but I'll e-mail you about those.

[limmenel]

Okay. Wow. I started reading this fic before class this morning, and had to stop half-way because I didn't have enough time to finish it without being late (I would have willingly skipped class to read it all, but my roommate is like my mother sometimes). And then I came home, and had to re-read the entire thing. Twice. Because I couldn't come up with a coherent post.

I really dislike MPREG for the post part. But this? This was creepyfascinating, hitting all of my squicks and making me read on eagerly, which I think shows just how utterly amazing this is. I love the BSI 'verse, and I love your writing, and I love this, the entire thing. The pain and hurt and the underlying want, and all of it just stomping on my heart.

Between this fic and stellaluna_'s, I don't think I've managed to pick my jaw up off of the floor all day.