wit beyond measure is man's greatest treasure

May 26, 2009 21:51


WHOOT. DONE.

Characters: Bloody Baron/Grey Lady (Helena Ravenclaw), mentions of Rowena Ravenclaw
Word Count: 3,298
Rating: PG13. For murder and suicide. Mentions of sex if you squint.
Notes: UGHHH. I hatehatehate the death scenes. And think the whole thing is... just all right.

Wit beyond measure, she reminded herself again. )

bloody baron, helena ravenclaw, baron/lady, grey lady, fan fiction of the month club

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jackalackala May 27 2009, 21:58:54 UTC
It reminded me of Wuthering Heights, except that I have yet to find a single redeeming quality in that book (excluding Edgar Linton, whom I love) and I quite enjoyed this. Helena is more Cathy than the Baron is Heathcliff but ah, how nice.

I don't know what you were saying about its being awful because it was not and you know it.

Although stories where nobody wins make me sad.

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scaratthedisco May 28 2009, 00:15:51 UTC
I actually liked that book, thank you. =P
(And you love Edgar? ... You can have him.)

The death scene is. =/ I only have Lily's down to an art or something. Others? Not so much.

I'm sorry. =(

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fdroosevelt May 28 2009, 01:45:48 UTC
Good. I can't really say I like it, so unless I have some sort of epiphany of love during the last eighty pages I don't think it'll be making my favorite books list. :-\
(I think he's a sweetheart, especially to ((little)) Cathy. Him/((older))Cathy is dreadful though.)

It is not. I do not think I collapsed dead on my keyboard so it's at least not AWFUL. I think it was actually GOOD, though. (and haha, I suck at ALL death scenes. I'm like, "So, Sirius? He got hit with this curse, and he didn't really mind, but it knocked him backwards and he fell through the Veil and er. And then he died. -awkward shuffling-" I am dreadful at writing anything serious.)

It's okay. I do love a good bit of melancholy.

ahaha, wrong journal. (just realized) You will deal, yes?

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scaratthedisco May 28 2009, 01:58:52 UTC
I've only studied and analyzed and thought about Lily's death more times than most people would think was sane. xD I know basically every little part of that scene.
(They're such cute parents. ^^)

Good then.

-dealing-
I felt kind of fabulous since a former president took the time to comment on my story.

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parlefrancais May 30 2009, 00:45:37 UTC
I like your Helena. I wouldn't think to make her...well, fiesty. XDD and actually, Mariekans, the death was my favorite part. So HAH!

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scaratthedisco May 30 2009, 00:48:50 UTC
She's kindasortareally a jerk.
But she's kindasorta a jerk in Deathly Hallows. So, you know. xD

Then the rest of the story must have been RUBBISH.
=O

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