Houle

[jamalov29]

Because I couldn't resist the prompt 'Doublemeat palace' ( points to icon).
(In French)
Title: Houle
Creator: Jamalov29
Rating: R
Words : 130
Setting: Season 6 Post Doublemeat Palace Spike’s POV
Summary/Prompt: He is always starving- so hungry for any piece of her ,and he bleeds.

Comments

[louise39]

At dawn, he bleeds. So sad.

[Hope google got it right]

[jamalov29]

Hope google got it right Yes , that's right.
So sad I know- I promise next time it won't be .
The whole imagery isn't so bleak but the end has a sorrowful tone, truly.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

[gillo]

Beautiful - tu as vraiment l'ame d'un poète! Le rencontre de l'eau et le feu me plait beaucoup - se sont nos amis!

J'ai essayé, mais c'est plutot difficile traduire de la poésie!

[jamalov29]

Beautiful - tu as vraiment l'ame d'un poète! Thank you so much.:) I love exploring Spike's despair, it's part of his journey with Buffy . The poetic touch helps , in fact.

[brutti_ma_buoni]

noyé de lassitude et d’ombres

Yep. That there's depression. Even if he is glorying in her presence for a moment, he can't luxuriate in it for long; he's far too realistic about the true relationship. Ouch.

[jamalov29]

Even if he is glorying in her presence for a moment, he can't luxuriate in it for long; he's far too realistic about the true relationship Indeed. Not the best of times for them in this part of season 6.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

[lullabye07]

Beautiful imagery .
"Que reste-t-il de son cœur, cette barque désarmée et rongée , loin de tous les climats ?" You broke my heart.

It's poetic and powerful and feels like a harrow in my flesh.

Thank you so much for sharing,Caroline

[jamalov29]

Thanks a lot for the kind words. I'm delighted you liked it .:)
I know it's sad but that scene was upsetting.

[moscow_watcher]

Poetique et triste.

[jamalov29]

Poetry helps going through the saddest times.
Merci beaucoup !