Comments | saucydiva: Fic: Meetings

saucydiva

Fic: Meetings

Jan 09, 2013 20:46

Title: Meetings
Author: saucydiva
Word count: 2K
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Clearly I don’t own it or I would get some amazing topiary going on the roof.
Timeline: Pemberley arc (written after episode 77)
Summary: “Darcy, I just realized something,” she announced, right as her brain caught up with her feet and warned her to stop ( Read more... )

lizzie bennet diaries, fic: one shot, fan fic

Comments 21

princess_george January 10 2013, 03:18:12 UTC

Aw, this is just so cute in so many parts, but it's far from cute in other parts, and the emotional core feels really right. And I feel like, although I kept thinking "uh-oh, this isn't very long" as I watched the scroll bar, it was precisely the right length. Which is such a big deal.

saucydiva January 10 2013, 22:47:45 UTC

I want to take this comment into my bed tonight and cuddle it. No one's ever mentioned my fic having an emotional core before, so I'm utterly pleased by this.

princess_george January 11 2013, 05:16:31 UTC

Plus, you predicted the ditching of the bow tie, did you notice that?

rikyl January 10 2013, 03:51:10 UTC

This is really lovely. I especially like the spine-tingly moment when their hands touch. Nice work filling in some blanks.

saucydiva January 10 2013, 22:27:17 UTC

Oooh, I've never been accused of making someone's spine tingle before. I like it!

craponaspatula January 10 2013, 03:59:14 UTC

How does this not end with them mushing their faces together? IT"S LIKE YOU DON'T KNOW ME AT ALL.

craponaspatula January 10 2013, 03:59:54 UTC

Well, the cupcake. Maybe you do know me. WELL PLAYED.

craponaspatula January 10 2013, 04:00:24 UTC

Also I assume you write everything for my personal enjoyment.

saucydiva January 10 2013, 21:51:50 UTC

I don't really know what sorta stuff you like. Faces mashing together? Maybe? You should be more clear. I demand a list.

Thread 5

courtknees1 January 10 2013, 05:26:49 UTC

"I’m just someone’s exclamation point.”

Ouch. Poor Darcy :( I like that you showed his reaction not just to the videos, but to the fandom side of things. His reaction to "are we okay?" was great, and when he told her they couldn't be friends because he was still in love with her I got the shivers.

saucydiva January 10 2013, 22:18:47 UTC

Awww, you're too sweet. But seriously, can you even imagine? You confess your crush, and the next day, you're all over the internet. It would feel like such a violation.

courtknees1 January 10 2013, 23:44:02 UTC

Oh god, no I don't want to even imagine. Rejection is crushing enough without public humiliation.

jncar January 10 2013, 06:17:30 UTC

Darcy's reaction to the fan culture surrounding the videos was perfect.

And I particularly enjoyed the way Lizzie slowly but surely warmed to him as she came to know and understand him better.

Delightful little story.

saucydiva January 10 2013, 22:23:27 UTC

The fan culture would be the worst, I think. After all, he didn't even know she had videos, much less that he would be in them. And how creepy would it be to read fan fic about yourself?

And I think Lizzie's going to have a similar trajectory on the show, and I'm excited to see it happen.