Comments | sandymg: jRobot, Ch. 3, [NC-17], RPS, J2 AU

sandymg

jRobot, Ch. 3, [NC-17], RPS, J2 AU

Jun 18, 2011 23:17

( jRobot Ch. 3 ... read more )

jensen/jared, jared padalecki, j2, rps, romantic dramedy, jensen ackles, 2011 spn/j2 big bang, jrobot, author: sandymg

Comments 15

roxymissrose June 22 2011, 01:35:44 UTC

ack! I'm all watering up!

sandymg June 22 2011, 01:50:52 UTC

Uh-oh. And it's still early. I hope you come back and let me think what you think of the conclusion. In either event, thanks for reading!

roxymissrose June 22 2011, 03:12:33 UTC

I've finished and will definitely leave a comment!

My dear--*shakes head*--it was quite a read!

sandymg June 22 2011, 14:31:13 UTC

So glad you liked the story!! :D

maguie June 22 2011, 06:53:25 UTC

hehe Robo-one with his information and percentages.....

OMG what's happening what did Jensen do?.. or Alona?

sandymg June 22 2011, 14:15:02 UTC

Thanks again. Glad that my robot is working for you. He was fun to write.

tmn1966 June 22 2011, 06:57:12 UTC

Aww, I really liked the scene at the beginning of the chapter where Jensen is uploading information to Pro One and Pro One thanks him.

Jensen put one hand on Pro-One’s shoulder and silent communication passed between the twins.

Gosh, here you again, painting scenes with your words:

Except Pro-One, who moved his head slowly in that processing way. “This is humorous?” he asked solemnly.Oooh, and I forgot to mention that I love how Jensen is now calling Pro One ‘him’ instead of ‘it’. Yes! And one other thing… Jared keeps seeing emotions on Pro One’s face. I wonder if that is something that Jensen built in (to help him pass as human) or if this is Pro One becoming a sentient being ( ... )

sandymg June 22 2011, 14:30:38 UTC

Thanks! Yep, the shift from 'it' to 'him' was deliberate. But also there was more to that. We can discuss that later. The 'baby' line is a personal fave although it's hokey. And the eavesdropped Alona/Jensen phone call might be one of my fave scenes in the entire story :)

I so love how you point out what you like.

fromcainwthlove June 22 2011, 19:08:48 UTC

“That’s my baby,“ he said with a small, close-mouthed grin. “Best thing I ever did.”

ummm hi, i am about to die with how sweet this is. pro-one is AWESOME. the chad? also AWESOMESAUCE. ahhh i love this so much.

sandymg June 22 2011, 19:57:46 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad youa re enjoying it. The 'baby' line is a personal favorite of mine :)

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sandymg July 18 2011, 18:40:57 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad you are enjoying my robot. I'm sorta sweet on him, too. Hope you enjoy the story's conclusion.

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sandymg July 18 2011, 18:54:53 UTC

Um, taking the fifth