Teaser Tuesday

Jan 06, 2009 19:27

I suck at summaries.  Seriously, I do.

I wrote this "prolouge" out a long time ago, added a few things in for info mainly for my creative piece final in my writing class, and used most of it as the beginning of the second chapter in the story.

Title For Now: Just Call Me Gus

FYI: Augustus/Gus is a girl, not a dude.

Quick Sum-Up:  My character ( Read more... )

writing, just call me gus

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maxiekatt2 January 7 2009, 03:14:29 UTC
Ooh - great opening, I like it. I like the humor you have laced through it, it helps give Gus a really likeable voice. And your summary is fine - without knowing the whole plot, it's hard to give tips on that. I suck at summaries as it is anyway. The original summary for my Outsiders fic was "What happens if Dally and Johnny don't die the night of the rumble." Yeah ... I eventually changed that, lol.

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sammyjones57 January 7 2009, 06:09:54 UTC
Isn't it werid how hard it is to sum up your own story? Every time I tried it was like two paragraphs and I'm like well crap forget it lol. Glad you liked the tid bit that I posted and thank you millions for commenting!!

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xmamagirlx January 7 2009, 06:00:47 UTC
whoot whoot! My fave story is here!! I like Teaser Tuesdays!! You should do a teaser everyday =D! You know I love Gus and her whole family...especially...*wink wink*...=D!

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sammyjones57 January 7 2009, 06:11:28 UTC
Thanks my muse! Without your help this story would have never gotten past this lil part at all!!

And I know exactly who you're referring too hehe! Kaden's first fan! lol

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