Fic: Lost

Jul 24, 2011 03:23

Title: LOST

Character: Radek Zelenka

Genre: Gen, Angst

Word Count: 1800~

Summary: Radek Zelenka found a lost soul in Atlantis' number one team

Disclaimer: not mine...

Author's note: no beta, so all faults solely mine

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Lost )

johnsheppard, fanfic, sga

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saphirablue July 23 2011, 21:46:29 UTC
What a great Outsider POV and a sad story. :( *hugs John*

Thank you! :)

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sakurablue13 July 24 2011, 16:17:16 UTC
thank YOU! ^^

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titan5 July 23 2011, 22:12:24 UTC
That is so sad, but almost inevitable. We saw signs of this at the end of season 5 and it made me sad then too. Love this being observed from Radek's POV. And the ending is so true to what usually happens in these cases - good intentions getting lost in the shuffle. Wish we could give John a hug (flailing arms and all).

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sakurablue13 July 24 2011, 16:50:34 UTC
it took quite some time to decide before i pick Radek. he wasn't exactly in the circle of the team, but pretty close since he was one of the original expedition member

thanks for the review ^^

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history13041985 July 24 2011, 10:05:20 UTC
It is really sad. But i can understand why Rodney, Teyla and Ronon don't see it. I'm a little surprised that Ronon didn't see that because i thought that with his years alone, he can see it.

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sakurablue13 July 24 2011, 16:48:04 UTC
i guess even Ronon has his insensitive moments...

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ninja007 July 25 2011, 06:50:41 UTC
Truly awesome. Poor John. One person notices, but forgets...

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fraggledragon August 3 2011, 20:53:49 UTC
Awwww! Poor John!! Tell him I am watching Tron Legacy tonight, and he is invited ;)

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