Fanfic: By the Light of the Fire (Tangled)

[saku_teiki]

Title: By the Light of the Fire
Fandom: Tangled
Pairing: Flynn/Rapunzel (sort of... not really)
Rating: G
Word Count: 2819
Summary: Rapunzel's never seen the stars from anywhere but her tower before.

Comments

[anysomething]

this is lovely! I love the dialogue and the last line is perfect. :)

[saku_teiki]

Thank you very much! Normally I have problems with final lines, but that one just came to me and I had more issues deciding on how many "really"s to put into the sentence.

I love writing the scenes that you don't get to see, so I'll probably write some more (like, for instance, some bits in the Festival day, or conversations I'm sure the two of them had in the Tower, or their journey back to the kingdom after the haircut, etc). :D

Thank you for commenting! :D <3

[galindaxxxx]

This was fantastic! The dialogue "sounded" so in character! Brava!

And, question: may I rec this on my tumblr (chickinthetower.tumblr.com)?

[saku_teiki]

Yay! I love when I get dialogue down pat. :D And thank you for your compliments!

Of course you may! Yay Tumblr! :)

[galindaxxxx]

You're more than welcome! And I LOVE that icon! ^^

Thank you! :D

[professor_spork]

Oh, this is absolutely lovely. I love constellation stories, and yours is fantastic, and very fitting.