Oneshot: Below the Surface

[ryunuka]

Title: Below the Surface
Genre: Angst
Pairing: KoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Sometimes life gets tiring, having to move and think and respond to the endless waves of unavoidable reality can take it's toll on the mind and the body, and sometimes there comes that urge to escape it all and slip below the surface...

Comments

[meilinsnape]

...omg seriously.. i feel something in my throat right now... T~T and feel like crying!
noo Tat-chan why did he want to do that!?
sniff...
Very good Koki!! “You think I don’t notice? You think I can’t see that look in your eyes? You think I don’t worry about you when your voice goes flat and your eyes stop shining?” aawww!! now I see Koki in a diferent way...*,* sweet!

Really nice oneshot!

Kisses!

[ryunuka]

I don't know why, I just wanted Koki to have to save Ueda from himself, I have a serious weakness for angst
Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting~!

[sono_kiseki]

I love how this story is going to kill all beliefs of how koki doesn't care about his band members. XD

no, Uebo, don't be so selfish as to rid me of my favourite idol and your band of a vowel! It isn't just any old letter, its a VOWEL. What would KATTN sound like? o_o

its pretty, and you captured the ... angsty feeling very well =D As usual, good work, Ryunuka-senpai! *offers cookies and throws confetti*

[ryunuka]

I think Koki is a total sweetheart, that badass image of his doesn't fool me for a second :P
Yay~! Cookies~! My kouhai is too good to me ^_^
Really happy you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting~!

[sono_kiseki]

=D Yeah, he's nice actually. now, if we could get him a proper hairstyle, and make Junno get back his OD/RESCUE hairstyle... everything would be perfect =D

Everybody likes cookies! =D *shot for being random* I'm off to watch Konkatsu, jaa!

[ryunuka]

Yay for rapidly changeing JE hairstyles, apparently Koki changes his hairstyle once a week :P

Yay~! Konkatsu, I wanna watch too~! :P

[jindaluver]

KODA!!!
i love how u made koki the one who save tat-chan.
but in real life, i really hope that this will nver happen.
tat-chan,don't kill urself.
*praying hard*

thanks for sharing~

[ryunuka]

I don't think Ueda would ever really consider killing himself, I just wanted Koki to save him ^_^
Thanks for reading and commenting~!

[annakas]

Yayyyy for some Kat-Tun rare pairing fic!

KoDa soo surprising yet I loved it.
I like it that it was the though looking but very very warmhearted Koki who noticed that something was wrong and intervened before it was too late.

Awwww poor Ueda was weirdly apathetic/depressed. Hopefully Koki can kick him out of his funk and make him see the beauty around him.

[ryunuka]

KoDa is kind of a rare pairing, but I think it kinda works sometimes.
This fic did turn out a lot more depressing than I orginally intended...oh well :P
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[fancyann1974]

omg...i am so glad that koki got there in time
so sad but wonderful
thank you for sharing

[ryunuka]

I was obviously not in a good mood when I wrote this :P
Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting~! ^_^