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[shayna611]

Cotton Candy #16. Diet
Story : knights
Rating : G
Timeframe : 1256
Word Count : 300

Comments

[greynonentity]

Amusing.

I kind of like the line "Aw, don't you want to change me" and Rune's immediate response of, "Don't want to give you more excuses." Like he'll give her crap for behaving the way she does, but he won't give her crap for being her.

That or I'm reading far too much in two simple sentences. But it's an interesting connotation.

-Kowareta

[shayna611]

no, I think you're onto them just fine =)

Thanks!

[fachefaucheux]

I feel Lyssa's pain, hardcore. It would be BLASPHEMY to let that pie get old. It must be eaten as fresh as possible.

And Rune's a dirty cheater, with his magic thinness. :P

[shayna611]

yes, it's the unwritten commandment - thou shalt not throw away perfectly good pie.

Seriously? He's built like Gen (though probably a tiny bit shorter) who wants that figure?

He is a dirty something-or-other for continuing to make all that pie though!

thanks :)

[fachefaucheux]

Yeah, seriously, if he didn't actively produce more delicious pie to plague (bless?) the rest of the non-emaciated world, the thinness wouldn't be quite as envy inducing. XD

I'm convinced Gen's only thin because K'aekniv ate all of his food during his important formative years.

[hi_falootin]

lol, it's grand that she accuses him of magic-ing it off XD Love the dialogue at the end. It's so perfect!

Wanting pie after I read your pieces is becoming a trend for me...

[shayna611]

Thank you!

(I need to stop writing about pie... or maybe just go bake one already)

[theoryoferin]

magicking it off would be such a fabulous ability!

[shayna611]

wouldn't it though?

thanks :)